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as i can see u just started writing, for start its not that bad a just try to find someone to edit for you bcs it seems english is nit your first land... overwall its good start keep going
Fantasy · RelativelySad
ch 0 1 Miserable Death
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ch 0 1 Prologue
Looking forward to read more, keep updating and try to find editor, a lot grammar errors so u should fix that, and thats it for me now, so keep updating not bad so fsr story ;)
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as i can see u just started writing, for start its not that bad a just try to find someone to edit for you bcs it seems english is nit your first land... overwall its good start keep going
Ultimate Lich System
Fantasy · RelativelySad