I have not read this one but for those who need the raw - 原来我真的是剑仙 ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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This is the 2nd novel I saw which is the almost the exact copy of reverend insanity. But even then it doesn't hold a candle to the original
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no problem👌 btw I liked the novel concept. keep it up and lots of love❤ from a fellow indian
ch 65 Chapter 65-Unexpected guest
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
Man I can tell that your writing skills have improved but even then it's not enough. just think about the readers who reads sam, sam, sam every paragraph or line😞. and try to make the status a bit more compact, if the status is displayed then more than half of the chapter gets covered up. mix all those arrow and sword technique into one technique by making a system update or something and try to give us readers a little more world background , etc. MC's future plans etc and there are some extra or specifically less useful skills in the status like that spirit energy control and that boxing technique, telepathy. reasons are 1-he still has to practice the control manually and that is no help or anything 2-this skill is useless because he will not fight monsters with barehand? and it's dumb to use hands in a fight when you can use swords 3- this skill is named wrong, that's not telepathy it's telekinesis. telepathy helps in reading minds and voicing your thoughts directly in another's head. hope you change these minor things then It will be more interesting to read. and for the writing part you can use Gramerly
ch 65 Chapter 65-Unexpected guest
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
Where is that mind protection or spiritual protection technique that his mother gave him???
ch 56 Chapter 56- Invitation.
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
MC is gigachad🙃
ch 0 7 Star Beasts and Tiger Demons
Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires
what shit chapter. no logic at all, even if it's a fantasy atlest the thinking process and obvious choice should be the same but here we are having a small baby thinking about independently searching for human civilization and having narcissistic thoughts while having a thirst for water and even then thinks about drink water in a crystal bottle found in a treasure chest without knowing what it is 😃. I mean the author must think that the readers lack imagination and shit
ch 0 6 The Necklace of the Soul
Fantasy · Son of Dragon
ya i concede rd all his previous situations and possible outcome at that fighting conditions and then wrote my comment. I was just stating my opinion of why he was not quick witted and not "knowledgeable". now at the current chapter he seams fine(quick witted, can judge others actions towards himself, and think about consequences) which I bet he would not have done before. That is character development. I was just suggesting the author to increase the pace a little.
ch 23 Hunter Hunted (4)
Fantasy · AkshatArpit
this dumness is getting annoying now. soon this will reach the 30th chapter mark if the MC is this dumb till then then I don't think the readers will like it that much. he needs to fully use his potential and most importantly get knowledge of the general things of his surroundings
ch 23 Hunter Hunted (4)
Fantasy · AkshatArpit
do you mind writing me the name/ chinese name of this something similar novel??