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Wait is Uranus personality in canon like that?

Wait , isn't mind and mana different? oh yeah and in danmachi they use mind right?. or are you just modifying it?

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I think he's too strong for level one. And he just 6 years old

Wow

Yow

please don't make him into a vengeful madman

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Hmm... Maybe

Yeah.. Finally someone danmachi fanfic like this

Shit... No harem please.

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well about falla and the system. that the difference between zeus&Hera Familia Members. even Though Zald And Alfia level below their captain but it's said that they have a chance to win especially without their disease. the key lies in their skills and development skills. levels above 6 could no longer rely on mere status to descend deep into the deep floors. it requires Savage's skills and development skills that can support their adventure Note : this it MTL

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it's kinda awkward, seriously. I mean, his mother and Alfia just walked to the MC like everything was fine (her physical condition) well except for your description of the emotions that were shown on their faces. and then boom, after talking straight to the MC, she died

if I may be blunt with my purely personal opinion. personal Mc a bit annoying. there is no point in keeping the story running like canon. I mean there are many things that author danmachi hasn't explained much and you can create your own world. And for advice only and of course only my personal opinion. try not to mention other anime" as often as possible, well that's just my opinion anyway. next it's better if you add more dialogue than making a long and rather boring pov MC narration (in my opinion:) Note : sorry for bad English, not mother language.

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About the Telephaty things. Is there such gods ability in canon /danmachi original

So what has Hermes done before?

Aren't the gods forbidden to use their arcanum in the underworld?