It doesn’t matter what genre
Just from a common sense view why do neither of the leads talk when they’re supposed to when its important ? I.e why didn’t she tell/ scream about the crystals in the ZV bodies? Like thats important in survival Vs an inner monologue that doesn’t seem to end. I like the story so far but this kinda disrupted my flow In readIng your story because I keep hetting annoyed 😒 but it’s still good keep up the great work!
ch 30 Be good and wait here
Fantasy · Norah_Koch
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ch 217 House Nystrom
Fantasy · sola_cola
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Just from a common sense view why do neither of the leads talk when they’re supposed to when its important ? I.e why didn’t she tell/ scream about the crystals in the ZV bodies? Like thats important in survival Vs an inner monologue that doesn’t seem to end. I like the story so far but this kinda disrupted my flow In readIng your story because I keep hetting annoyed 😒 but it’s still good keep up the great work!
ch 30 Be good and wait here
Hunting for a Husband in a Vampire Apocalypse
Fantasy · Norah_Koch