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Good story, I like what I have seen so far. I'm excited about what will be happening when he starts expanding and more of the world and the grander story is revealed. Grammar is also improving steadily. In the first chapters, there were words missing or larger errors, now there is much less of such things, and the story flows better. I'm heartened to see the author steadily improving in quality. Good job!

Cornbringer does it again with a new literary contribution. good stuff ..................................................................

This is a fic worth reading, there are some small issues with the flow in the beginning chapters but you can tell that the author hits his stride as it progresses. Keep it up!

A great novel, with far better grammar than one should reasonably expect from this website. It is clear to see that the author is experienced has planned out this journey instead of writing whatever comes to mind. One thing I must point out that I found incredibly refreshing is that this author actually comprehends the value and benefits provided by life experience. The protagonist's thought processes and actions conform to his stated background as a highly intelligent, wily old man. I see it so often that these so-called "old monsters" when reincarnated, completely forget every single bit of logic, experience, and force of will that they must have gained through their struggles and immediately start acting the age of their body and make the most brainless and infuriating decisions that anyone with even a tenth of their experience could avoid effortlessly. To summarize, if you are looking for a reincarnation novel with a thoughtful, calculating, and actually intelligent character, this one is for you.

The misunderstanding present in this book are great. I'm greatly expecting the day that it all comes out into the open. this book to be even more glorious that day!