It already happened once. If you dont have the presence of mind to prevent the same mistake from happening its on you.
A/N: This chapter was supposed to be 5000 words long. Which it was and would have been... if webnovel had not decided to make 15 draft chapters vanish into thin air.
Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception
Anime & Comics · Yesnth
So the mc is not only super op but faces no difficulty bringing ppl to his side. Wow, how exiciting.
Cause author doesnt know any other way to get his point across than by making mobs speak baseless rumors.
The Sect Leader spoke those words softly, but they echoed throughout the entire Strength Soul Hall. Xuanyuan immediately released the boy from his grasp, and knelt down on one knee, dropping his head.
Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
Anime & Comics · Bruhdamante
Cringe. There are so many ways to depict the mcs feelings for his master and author chose the most cliche childish way to do it. Still relying on mobs speaking baseless rumours to forward the plot. Cmon bruh move on.
Why is the higest class called E not EX or something. Its so confusing.
This book has been deleted.
Bruh didnt you have this same thing happen before. You only have urself to blame. Is it really so difficult to use word or notepad?
A/N: This chapter was supposed to be 5000 words long. Which it was and would have been... if webnovel had not decided to make 15 draft chapters vanish into thin air.
Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception
Anime & Comics · Yesnth
No primeval essence stones used in recipe?
This is so bad. How does the mc have some magical healing ability now?
Looks good so far, has potential.
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original Avatar: Jǫrðsaga
There is beauty in Chaos and serenity in Order. One cannot exist without the other. Each gives meaning to their counterpart, eternal rivals and eternal lovers. It’s a shame only a rare few ever come to this revelation. Most live their lives trapped in an illusion, their path to enlightenment forever cut off. A lie will forever remain a lie, no matter how sweet it is. I will not turn a blind eye to the truth of the world. It matters not what others think of me, be they family, friends, allies, or enemies. They may call me a monster, a devil, a lunatic even. But I will not bend. I will not break. I will not be forced into conformity under threat posed by the slave of Order. Because what is Order if not Chaos’ accomplice? There is only one path worth treading, and I will do whatever it takes to advance forward. For I am Sǫlmundr, Lord of the Earth. **************************************************************** Avatar series fanfic. The first volume will not have anything canon. I apologise in advance. It will be setting up the mcs background and origins. The power system in the avatar is pretty non-confrontational. You don’t have to fight for resources like in cultivation novels, so the frequency of his evil acts will be pretty spread out. This is a slow burn novel that I hope will draw readers into the world and slowly build up to whatever the climax of each arc is. I can only promise that he will always be a rational, benefits based mc. This is my first novel so tell me your thoughts or any improvements I can make. Chapter length: ≈ 2k words Updates: Once a week Alt Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51100/avatar-jorsaga45 Chs 867 Collections
This is the written equivalent of someone that likes to listen to the sound of their own voice a little too much. 95% exposition 5% action. Author has too high of an opinion of himself and thinks hes capable of writing a grand inspirational scene. Somehow managed to make it more eyerolling than those cliched scenes in shounen. Gj.
Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
Anime & Comics · Bruhdamante