I'm a newbie writer who's writing to improve my English and bc I really enjoy.
2020-12-02 Joined Brazil
Hey, appreciate the feedback! About what you mentioned, I'm gonna stick with those dashes—I've had them in my toolkit for a while now. Hope it grows on you. Big thanks for the input. If there's anything else you reckon could use a tweak, drop it my way. Always up for refining the craft. Cheers! 📝✌️
ch 0 1 Richard
Fantasy · RiverGoat
So, is that an invite? Interesting.
While the guards looked every where, Elena were looking at Richard with a playful smile. — Are you trying to take me as a hostage? — She was having fun with this boy, and she was feeling tempted to accept his proposal.
Fantasy · RiverGoat
I brought him up earlier in this chapter. He's one of Gavin's lackeys.
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Fantasy · RiverGoat
Hey, thanks a bunch for the feedback! I totally get that the style might not be everyone's cup of tea, but it's the kind of writing I vibe with and feel comfortable in. Still, I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.
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Fantasy · RiverGoat
Big thanks for the golden ticket, WesternGod! It totally made my day. Appreciate it a ton!
ch 23 Richard's battle
Fantasy · RiverGoat
Poor Richard
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Fantasy · RiverGoat
I'd like to express my heartfelt gratitude to all of you who have generously supported me with your power stone. A special thanks to Gabriel_Henrique_8729, who has been supporting me since the beginning. Also, I'd like to thank Nicholas_Wygle for the three power stones and jotape_do_morro for one power stone. I hope y'all keep supporting me
ch 19 B-CLASS II
Fantasy · RiverGoat
Well, it took like 2 hours to get one, but I used: Blond girl, classroom, sunrise, anime.
I've clicked in the photo I've just taken and showed it to her.
Urban · RiverGoat
I think it's called Dall-E.
I've clicked in the photo I've just taken and showed it to her.
Urban · RiverGoat
But the arm is self-made, that's why isn't as good as the rest.
I've clicked in the photo I've just taken and showed it to her.
Urban · RiverGoat
Nop, I've used an A.I. to do it.
I've clicked in the photo I've just taken and showed it to her.
Urban · RiverGoat
Lee pov of Jesse (Ignore her arm and hand, I struggled with it.
I've clicked in the photo I've just taken and showed it to her.
Urban · RiverGoat
Jesse picture (Ignore her arm, I struggled with it)
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Urban · RiverGoat
That's what Lee thought.
[Better than your low amount of brain cells think, the host's status was level 0 at acting]
Urban · RiverGoat
Yeah, that's the thing, he was just too naive. Nice to see someone picking up on that. Indeed, it was a self-inflicted tragedy.
ch 13 Creature
The Language Mage
Fantasy · RiverGoat