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KannySenpai
female LV 2I'm your Senpai <3 Wattpad Account: @ChloroformGospel
2020-12-01 Joined United StatesBadges 5
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I guess you'll just have to wait and see! ;-)
ch 0 3 3 ==> What Happened?
Roses Are Red, War Is Black
War · KannySenpai
'Can you take off your clothes?' as if that's a casual question to ask someone 😂
"Can you take off your clothes?"
Mr. Moon Rabbit, I'm Not Yours!
Fantasy · RachelRuth
The Moon Bunny guy seems so innocent and cute... I want to hug him and make him mine! 😭 Amazing chapter! I love the way you write! This is certainly a unique romance that I can't wait to unfold. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
ch 0 2 If I Were To Believe
Mr. Moon Rabbit, I'm Not Yours!
Fantasy · RachelRuth
That landlord has a pervy mind! 😂
"Such ambiguous answers, what will you be doing in the bed?" A teasing grin was on the landlady's face. "Or should I say, who will you be doing there?"
Mr. Moon Rabbit, I'm Not Yours!
Fantasy · RachelRuth
This made me laugh 😂
"Still!" His face was red as he lifted his basket, turning away from her. "You shouldn't be just draping them for everyone to see. Bye!"
Mr. Moon Rabbit, I'm Not Yours!
Fantasy · RachelRuth
Thank you so much! It really means a lot to have support with this contest! ❤❤❤
ch 0 1 1 ==> Karkat Vantas
Roses Are Red, War Is Black
War · KannySenpai
Yes, it is apart of the worldbuilding concept! 'Pale' is a trollian term used to describe a part of their quadrants ( relationships )! The book will explain more about troll concepts of romance and friendship as I continue to write it. But basically, pale is another term for friend or friendship. [img=recommend] I apologize for the confusion my dear reader!
The very mention of food made you have enough motivation to get out of the trap you call a bed, well, a human mattress on the hard floor. You groggily sit up and stretch an arm into the air, giving a grunt like noise before settling your feet on the cold flooring. Your mind raced with the still fresh dream you just had, so real to an extent of feeling the shit that got dealt. They've been getting progressively worse every night, and you're not too sure how much more you could take before the decision of not sleeping at all would be considered a good idea. The thought of you being happy and relieved from your life is half true, but the actual leaving part would be quite difficult. Your moirail ( best friend ), you really don't want to leave the only person that cares of you rather the only quadrant you can actually keep a balance with. You love her, to the most extent of pale of course and wouldn't be that self-centered into disappearing without her consent.
Roses Are Red, War Is Black
War · KannySenpai
Awe, what an awesome dude...
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I Dare Not Hope
Urban · bishop1275
That got spicy for a sec- good for her. [img=update]
ch 0 2 Preparing for a long, long day
I Dare Not Hope
Urban · bishop1275
Hey no problem! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I've read up to the 9th chapter released so far, and overall the Author does a good job describing the surroundings and you have a generalized idea of what's going on. The one thing that irks me is the usage of 'Ur' and 'Tho' throughout the book and in some instances there are random capitalized letters in the paragraphs. There's also some missing punctuation. If this is fixed, then the paragraphs themselves are flawless and the chapter lengths slowly get longer as you read on. Might I add on a personal note, the rated-R chapter, the book could have gone without. The MC is quite enjoyable throughout the book so far, with his witty comebacks to his head-strong personality. He's not overly powered and realizes his flaws, which draws me more in to looking forward for the future character development! Author, I congrats you with your flawless character and I will be keeping tabs on this book in future updates! I hope you keep improving your writing skills and I can't wait to see what you do with this book. [img=update]
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This chapter reminds me of an anime fight scene! I love the detail.
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Actually I have considered it! I was thinking to just post it to an auxiliary page for the book. I do understand it can be confusing to some haha 😄
ch 0 4 4 ==> A Secret
Roses Are Red, War Is Black
War · KannySenpai