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Beholding the puzzled expression of the Ice King, the Devil Spawn revealed a weak smile on its face. His red skin began to darken due to the baleful aura that drilled toward his pores (one of the negative effects of the cursed item), making him sustain corruption that originated from the abyss- gritting his teeth as he hurriedly cast his scan toward the item... Still hadn't gained preliminary knowledge regarding it since the Devil told him that prying toward its secret could damage one's mind!
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Stop doing this after- comment narration. It’s stupid and just something to fill up the word count. It adds literally nothing to the plot each and every time.
Looking at the energetic people around him, Leo's corrupted heart couldn't help but beat faster. (Well, It's just the thought of the Mc, He might not do it.)
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Is it f*ckinglegible or are there a sh*t-ton of errors? No one cares about the amount of action, get your grammar straight or invest in someone who actually understands the f*king language aka an editor
(If you hate chapters without fighting and full of dialogue it's recommended to skip this chapter (^-^ ). )
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
This sentence is useless fluff. Please. Just get an editor jfc
"Woah, Domain... (He doesn't know what domain is but the sound of it makes the Mc feel good.)
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Hey , get an editor
"So the valuable the sacrifices, the valuable the cultivation technique is... Huh."
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
What in tarnation
Sigh... Although the skill is the same, the difference between the two is like mud and heaven.
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Puppetry and necromancy
[ Combine (Features): Combine two skills to create a brand new skill!
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
So when do you get an editor?
"Cough... are you previously from mental!?" She angrily said, quickly turning around, afraid to see Leo's action of smelling the essence of the zombie. Although she already turned around, she still couldn't help but shiver slightly.
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
In order to”””
Although Leo was only currently at level 19 in the Mortal Realm, in able to increase his level he needed to accumulate/gain almost 2,000 exp to advance... Not only that, killing zombies below his level would inexplicably lessen the exp he will gain!
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
SAME
To be exact, Leo always thinks something strange that usually sane people wouldn't think.
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
I see math is a basic skill you failed to obtain
Sighing deeply Leo didn't hesitate further as he immediately upgraded the skills. Bringing his original 2,500 horror points to 1,100 points.
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Yes, because his physical strength doesn’t need aaaany help.
[ Build up Stamina (Uncommon) - Increased the stamina of a being by 2 per level of the skill.
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Dude idk where you live, stay away from minors. There shouldn’t BE a problem
Although there might be some minor problems with the grammar, If you find some please remind me so I can avoid the problem in the future.
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
No he became artistic
"Wierd, did the land expand? Or did the Earth expand?"
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
A child isn’t this heavy….
He didn't even know why or how he managed to do it in an instant but the strength he shows currently seems incomparable to normal standards, If he could think properly he would learn that this phenomenon is called adrenaline rush.
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
In the , one specific colored group would call this a peaceful protest
"Isn't that just a protest? How could be there someone holding a gun!?"
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Are you in the UK?
"Isn't that just a protest? How could be there someone holding a gun!?"
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
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Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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Games · Adui