Mikkel_Mortensen

The greatest quality of the authors many works, is the Main character. the main character Is best described as beyond good and evil, a person separated from morality. A person capable and willing to act For his own betterment, and to Shape the world around him to his will.

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ch 11 Protector of Earth

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Thank you for the chapter. Hope the comments I have left have helped.😁

ch 11 Protector of Earth

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(After finishing his meal)

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(to test out if my lepidopterran)

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(Despite the breakfast we had earlier today)

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(as it Tried to rip my guts out)

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(Eventually losing it from sight,) changed to (Eventually losing sight of it,)

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(car key)

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(You always told us that we could tell you anything.)

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(When you said it showed up for you.) I'm having trouble understanding what you are meaning In this Part.🤔 I recommend you look it over, To see if you can find a better way to describe it😅