so he cured one kind of cancer?
'I HOPE HE GETS ASS CANCER, wait no, I just cured that... WELL THEN I HOPE HE GETS AIDS, YEAH, I HOPE HE GETS TURBO AIDS'
Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1
kindergarden hast Grades?
ch 0 -1 Jason's Life Prior
Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1
so he can cure cancer but not aids?
'I HOPE HE GETS ASS CANCER, wait no, I just cured that... WELL THEN I HOPE HE GETS AIDS, YEAH, I HOPE HE GETS TURBO AIDS'
Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1
maybe focus on one perspective like you switched from first to third
ch 0 5 Whispers of the Unknown
Sci-fi · SkullfireGrimthorn
Oi dude it repeats might wanna delet that
ch 0 2 Inferno in the Wetland
Sci-fi · SkullfireGrimthorn
you got me hooked although a little confusing looking forward to what's coming next
ch 0 1 Screams Of Despair
Sci-fi · SkullfireGrimthorn
indeed lol
[Glacial Fox] [Req: Agility = 35; Toughness = 30; could only evolve in the cold environment]
Fantasy · godadi
wouldnt that be rather theier ancestors
"You stop right there, My name is Eric Sunshield of the Sunshields, how dare you a filthy commoner lay a hand on one of my people. Especially a Redhead like you."
Fantasy · JKSManga
That kinda made me laugh. Thanks for the chapter.
ch 47 Chase
Fantasy · Fixten
Does everyone relise he still thinks he is playing a game?
The first is a shield made of graphene, a material that is known to be 10x sturdier than steel. He chose this material because, graphene is also lightweight, making maneuverability easier. However, he did not choose a sword as his assault weapon. Instead, he chose two shields, occupying his left hand and his right hand weapon.
Games · Campoccino
the thing is it is possible to do that exactly in the first 4 to 5 chapters Not only do you have to do that all in one but in bits adding mystery. That will maybe sound harsh but give me one good reason why I should continue reading a book that lacks originality. with an MC that seems to switch personalities every time he talks. My last hint for you is to start by first finding out who your character is and start living it. Heck maybe get into science labor and ask some people. Don't focus on shitting out two chapters per day and focus on the Character and the world. if you ain't still 12 year old stop making excuses like that. Long enough on webnovel and I heard it all.
Who Needs Magical Talent? I have SCIENCE!
Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1