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ch 0 1 1/18/2019
Anime & Comics · ExperienceSect
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you still need to work on your pacing, and some other stuff, but for the most part i like the way he meets his girl and stuff and how the character voice is unique. good job
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ch 0 1 1/18/2019
Exp Sect
Anime & Comics · ExperienceSect