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You so are.

Someone passes me from behind, walking to the entrance of the cave. I know she has been here ever since Luxia killed the Legion Commander, so I am not surprised. I even let the High Priest live a little bit longer for her. I am not making excuses. 

On The Other Side: I Quit Being Human

On The Other Side: I Quit Being Human

Fantasy · Frona_Gorgophone

keyes4141
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Shouldn’ t it be Heroes sense there are many of them.

"There were always many chances for our predecessors to end the Hero, but they didn't. I am tired of seeing the bad side losing due to their stupidity, so I am going to change history. The Hero hasn't grown to their full potential yet—it is the perfect time to end them."

On The Other Side: I Quit Being Human

On The Other Side: I Quit Being Human

Fantasy · Frona_Gorgophone

keyes4141
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Nature selection? So wait half the class has already been killed on missions or other things already. Is that what this is saying?

'Well, there are still another twenty-six bastards who I can vent my anger on. I will just have more fun with them later.' At this point, he still didn't know that almost half of the Heroes—his "friends"—had already lost in nature selection.

On The Other Side: I Quit Being Human

On The Other Side: I Quit Being Human

Fantasy · Frona_Gorgophone

keyes4141
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What about her younger sister? We got to see how her parents changed in treating and the clan as a whole but not her sister.

She was no longer the type who only lived by morals and codes instilled in her since childhood. She no longer cared about her clan or family and even the blood ties meant nothing to her. 

Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

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keyes4141
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I feel bad for her.

Edna's expression turned gloomy. Because everyone in the hero's party already knew that Edna had fallen in love with Axel a long time ago. However… the man she wanted to be with didn't even bother to look at her when she was at death's door. 

Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

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Figured it would either be pride or wrath.

Upon looking at the astonished people watching him, he held his head high. He had finished his Awakening, obtaining Pride as his Origin.

On The Other Side: I Quit Being Human

On The Other Side: I Quit Being Human

Fantasy · Frona_Gorgophone

keyes4141
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A spray on tan would also help, for hair I’ m thinking black or have him be a red head.

"You're not going looking like that, though. We need to color your hair… and change your name."

Villain Retirement

Villain Retirement

Urban · Romeru

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If it’ s unspoken it doesn’ t really hold much weight in a trail. (In my opinion away)

"For the sake of his pride and in the fit of anger… Oakenshield has committed an unspoken taboo of our craft and the dwarven race." said the second-ranked blacksmith of the empire.

Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

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I think I now know why Rudra isn’ t at 100% loyalty, if all the others each have a bit of Kahn in them (personality wise) then Rudra might represent Kahn’s behavior to never bow his head to anyone. Even himself.

Aside from Rudra, everyone else had it and now… thanks to this skill and the resources they already had at hand… Omega successfully raised his strength and made a breakthrough inside the Table of Arcana after Kahn and Rathnaar gave him access to the Chamber of Exaltation to make a breakthrough without gathering anyone's attention. 

Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

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What does she mean haven’t labled she looked right at a camera and said they were boyfriend girlfriend, author u should know better than to do that, it reminds me of this book in the early chapters and not in a good way.

"B… boyfriend!?" The sparks on V's back grew even more violent, "I… I mean, we could be… but we haven't really labeled ourselves or anything like that but… maybe we can talk about it later alone, Riley?"

Villain Retirement

Villain Retirement

Urban · Romeru

keyes4141
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Should have been blue, then we could have gotten a red vs blue referance.

"It's an honor to finally meet you, your highness." spoke who had the voice of a middle-aged man this time and their group was covered in green robes, a white mask with a sigil of a particular empire. 

Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

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I thought it was a Star Trek reference.

Signifying Kahn's journey as a lonewolf character when I named him at the beginning of the novel. 

Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

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keyes4141
keyes4141
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It’ s all empires I thought there were some kingdoms too.

How the hell am I supposed to take on 12 empires on my own even with the support of one?" complained Kahn with an exasperated expression. 

Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

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keyes4141
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After seeing the artwork for both characters, I think C is better looking than K.

Since the Emperor's Chosen competition… Celine was overshadowed by both Kahn and Kassandra. 

Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

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Where/when did these rumors come from and why would people believe it?

And if the rumors are right… then he too is a descendant of the Imperial bloodline." he spoke with a somber expression. 

Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

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