Naw, you good. I'm glad you got it off your chest. And critics... Gosh freaking CALM DOWN. People who write fanfics do it for the LOVE of the series. Something that ALL OF US share. If you are looking for something PROFESSIONALLY written, then go freaking read War And Peace or something. And if you are looking for something PERFECT, then give up. NO ONE is perfect. If you get RID of your ATTITUDE and ACCEPT the novel as it is, you will be able to ENJOY a new spin to one of your FAVORITE book series. Honestly, if this isn't what YOU WANT, go write a 200+ chapter fanfic ON YOUR OWN.
ch 226 I Don't Even Know Why I'm Writing This
Book&Literature · Mystical_Snowflake
Bro, what are they gonna name the group and themselves?
But to her great surprise no one gave up, not even Colin, who was mostly struggling with Transfiguration. After that Chris was sure that there going to be another batch of illegal Animagus in Hogwarts.
Book&Literature · Mystical_Snowflake
KILL IT
"There was a beetle on your shoulder." Jason replied.
Book&Literature · Mystical_Snowflake
Ha ha then he should be glad I didn't fire the spell
"Who cares?" said Chris, Harry and Ron together.
Book&Literature · Mystical_Snowflake
Same girl
Chris felt disgusted.
Book&Literature · Mystical_Snowflake
why Why WHY!!! THIS IS SUCH A RED FLAG!!! PLEASE NO!!! THIS IS SO GREAT AND WHOLESOME WITH A LITTLE BIT OF SPICE AND I LIKE IT!!! NOW I HAVE TO WORRY!!!
"Wow." Mitchell's eyes widened in disbelief. I understood. Sometimes I couldn't believe it either. Not that Jeremy was some baseball star, but that he was a star that wanted to be apart of my life. To watch my high school games, donate a gym to my school, call to talk about my classes. Sometimes none of it felt real. The Atkins taking me in, getting me into baseball, then adopting me. I've been on a lucky streak as of late.
Sports · half_empty
Man, I wish I wasn't so broke, then I could read The Last Curve and get the extra chapters.
ch 811 V3 ch46 (VS Lowell HS 1)
Sports · half_empty
Cool, I've read some where you could cast in any language, including magical ones like parseltongue which is consider closer to magic and therefore more powerful. I thought it was really neat.
"et tandem intrat sanguinem predonum" said the hooded man in an excited manner.
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
Good job me
"Well done, my other self," said the high, cold voice from behind the steam, "we have taken another step to becoming invincible. To overcoming death."
Book&Literature · CrossArk
Yay! Draco!
ch 166 Ch.166 Draco-nic talk
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
And may it be a glorious one
ch 165 Ch. 165 Dancing around Tyranny
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
I'm probably confused due to my lack of knowledge about these topics. The chapters themselves have been great and overtime they explain themselves adding a great sense of mystery to it. Its probably because of that, that this series is so different and intriguing. So even though I have questions, I believe they will get answered over time.
ch 80 Reaper (2)
Urban · Barbare
I am confused as much as I am intrigued
ch 80 Reaper (2)
Urban · Barbare
Lol ya, I get it. I just thought steal sounded funnier.
''Would you like Hadrian to participate in a Heritage test to see if there are any other vaults he could claim?'' said Balgrott with a greedy smirk visible on his face.
Book&Literature · MIKK
Hello, welcome back
ch 100 Athena's Origin
Book&Literature · Jmwells2003
Ya, your second guess is probably right. He won't fight back. After years of abuse from such a young age, it's so integrated into his life that it's all he knows. Physchologically, the abuse was just as bad if not worse than the physical abuse. His reactions of recoiling and shying away from pain is practically reflex to him. He probably hates violence of any kind now, so the idea of fighting back is no different than asking someone to touch a hot stove. They know that it is physically possible, but physchologically, they can't bring themselves to do it.
"How is he today?" Doug Duncan asked the old doctor sitting across from him. They both sat in the doctors private office talking about Duncan's most recent case. A boy beaten so badly by his mother that even the paramedic threw up after coming to the bloody scene.
The Hitting Zone
Sports · half_empty