hey, sorry to bother you but if you are interested to be a beta reader for the novel... then, please comment again :)
ch 50 chapter 50 : END ?
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i'd like to know more about the platform...
Thank you so much for the review, 馃グ馃槏馃槏馃槏
they are both ... 馃槄
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" Thanks for your vote handsome.. but don't think because of your vote I will forget that you are trash F ranked hero.. but don't worry still I can protect you until I get bored "
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I know it's frustrating but this is how children of hades acted always, moody, grumpy like their moods swigs a lot.
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thanks, dude, I will edit previous chapters again :)
ch 12 chapter 12 : Strongest Tribes
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no. once peoples entered in the portals it disappears and opens again when Final boss killed... : )
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sometimes I forgot that what pov I'm writing... lol..
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thanks a lot, friend... and I already have 25 chapters in my draft.. And I am trying my best to improve my writing style as you suggested .
ch 0 7 chapter 7 : New roommates
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According to him, he only needs two* so she is free to kill for Dan.
ch 24 24. Second try
My Deathless System
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