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SixJupiter
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Sorry to hear that, and if you give the novel more time to develop there will be an interesting element added to the story a bit further in. It is just rather early in the novel right now as we build our current situations. Hope you continue to read. Have a good day.
[Chosen class Barbarian]
Forgotten Paradise
Games · SixJupiter
You are correct the quest should have been legendary as well so it is now changed
[Legendary Quest Complete]
Forgotten Paradise
Games · SixJupiter
For those who care about a little extra lore. the reason Ryan does not recognize Chae-won is that she would have died tonight to the fat man from before. Meaning she was never really in Ryan's first life and which is why he could not remember her even though she would have been a representative.
'I don't think I have seen anyone like her before in both my lives. I think I would have recognized her if anyone looked like her as she has a very different kind of beauty to her.'
Forgotten Paradise
Games · SixJupiter
Yes, I am redoing the novel as the first time it released it was rather poorly done with really no vision for how the story would progress. The grammer and writing was also rather poor, so everything for the most part has been redone even some tiny parts of the beginning story.
ch 0 1 All is Forgotten
Forgotten Paradise
Games · SixJupiter
I will adjust it so the rewards are clearer. I can also see now how the - would make it rather confusing. 👍🏽Thank you for the input.
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Forgotten Paradise
Games · SixJupiter
Fixed it. You are right, so i changed it to 12 instead of 10. Thank you for the catch. 👍🏽
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Forgotten Paradise
Games · SixJupiter
I personally disagree. It is all new to her she has every right to be angry and confused right off the bat. Anyone would be agree just learning about such a thing. I think if she was not this mad then it would just show she didnt really love him.
Hearing that, Davis's expression turned serious, "Mother, if you don't talk wholeheartedly with father, only misunderstandings will ensue from here on out." Though he felt that Logan deserved it.
Divine Emperor of Death
Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
Done? I hope with all my being that he kills her in the future. You know what even worse he shoild treat her as a friend and kill her with Heaven.
The other Guild Masters sighed again, something that they had been doing a lot since they met Gravis. The Guild Master of Water walked forward, a smile on her face.
Lightning Is the Only Way
Eastern · Warmaisach
That is literally all her character was. She is personally the woman by his side I like the least by a large margin. She will bring nothing to the novel now? Everything she has can be displayed by the others around him. Maybe I am just mad she always just played the fence between the two never picking a side and always sliding through.
Qing Qiumu, however, felt strange as she sensed with abundant awareness that Long Chen's life was ending. She didn't feel sad. She didn't feel angry. She only saw Wei Wuyin and felt relieved that this was all over. Did this make her a vile person?
Paragon of Sin
Eastern · KevinAscending
This is a good interpretation of their bickering at Alexander.
'Wait a second. WE? I am dead. I didn't even get to use any abilities. This life was a scam. God or world creator in my next life please give me cooler abilities like a Demon system.' Alexander finished sighing to himself before continuing down the tunnel. Coming into a large corridor with heavy pressure being exerted around himself. It felt like he was walking deep in the ocean with pressure coming down on every part of his body.
Infinite Archer of Space
Fantasy · SixJupiter
The fur does not move as it is black and blue as it is not affected by the space around it. Without spoiling too much Cerberus will grow with Alexander. So, look forward to that.
A large black dog with blue on his paws and 6 pairs of red eyes walked out from a tear in the middle of the room. Where the previous center of the room was now stood a large three-headed dog.
Infinite Archer of Space
Fantasy · SixJupiter
Good question both the worlds share the language, but that is not to say everyone in this new world speaks only one language. He just so happened to be found in a kingdom that shares it. Also, thank you the world is very large so look forward to many cities and cool scenic scenes.
ch 0 2 Where am I?
Infinite Archer of Space
Fantasy · SixJupiter
Exactly.
"Nice to see you this Morning Captain Collins. What do you have there in your hand?" A large man with a figure of a world champion bodybuilder with a bald head asked softly, but with a strong oppressive aura held within those few words.
Infinite Archer of Space
Fantasy · SixJupiter
You do have a point as he could have went to the police, but it would have been after already drinking the poisoned water. Alexander knew he was going to die and wanted to die doing what he loved the most that made him forget about his past. Although he was the world’s best archer at the time it could not be proven as he never won the International Championship, so it was his first year truly being the best so he needed to win. Sadly he never got the oppurtunity.
ch 0 1 First life
Infinite Archer of Space
Fantasy · SixJupiter
In a sense that is all he is for now, but I have some ideas for spreading the drunken brawler into something more interesting. The cover of the novel is a small hint into what I plan to do. You can also guess now that I have talked about a couple more elements of everything.
ch 18 Countdown Begins
Forgotten Paradise
Games · SixJupiter