Webnovel Author: Wolfie_Lawless - Novel&Fanfic Collection

The story so far is really good! It has a great hook and your wanting to see what happens next to young Dawn. I can't wait to see what is to come!

I like it it's got good characters and a well-developed plot with a lot of action. I can not wait to see what happens next to Richard. I hope the author gets lots of love for this work.

The characters are well developed. The plot is interesting, to say the least. I like how the Bones and Victoria bounce off each other. I am a sucker for enemies to lover troop so a vampire hunting half-blood vampire and a pureblood vampire falling in love is <3. I can not wait for more and I hope everyone else enjoyed it as much as I did!

I love the characters. I like the worlds that where building. The writing is good. However jumping from world to world is a headache too keep up with all the time. one reason I don't like stories that have multiple worlds ... I had the same issue with the pendragon books.

The story is moving along well and I like how the characters interact with each other. While I am not a system fan its not a bad story and I wish the author luck.

It has a great story line. The characters are well developed. The plot seems to know what its doing. You can lose yourself in this story and its characters.

Its a good story the plot is good. The characters are well developed. I can't wait for more! The way the author has it going just makes you want more.

The story is great. I like it. The plot is sound, it flows nicely and has some interesting characters. I can't wait to see what happened next.

Its a good story. I got a little lost at the beginning but that straighted out itself. But that's probably just me. It has some interesting characters and its got a good plot going!

I love it! Thank you for not copping out with the language it was an odd way to deal with a language barrier. A seed! *giggles* I can't wait for the next chapter with big brother Oliphym.