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I think you mean "but to the prepared mind, re-life was the next great adventure."
Transmigrating twenty-two years in the past into the body of a seven-year-old may seem like a massive inconvenience, but to the ill-prepared mind, re-life was the next great adventure. The mechanics of my arrival in the time-stream would remain a mystery till my dying day.
I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)
Movies · BarCalak
This has got nothing to do with the previous 4 paragraphs...
Now, through his battle with Marenoshin Ōmaeda, Ailin had proven to the Second Division members that he possessed the strength to become their vice captain.
Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
Anime & Comics · ZenpaiTrans
When did this happen?
However, Ailin had witnessed a captain unveil Bankai before. Moreover, neither Yoruichi or Urahara had released Reiatsu. Hence the pressure they exuded didn't exceed Ailin's sensations when facing Yamamoto Genryusai previously.
Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
Anime & Comics · ZenpaiTrans
That's the same zanpakuto as his son. That's just lazy writing. Why even bother...
"Smash him apart, Gegetsuburi!"
Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
Anime & Comics · ZenpaiTrans
Urahara was never the vice captain??? He was the 3rd seat...
The other had messy, dull yellow hair and listless eyes, seemingly disinterested in everything. This was the current Vice-Captain of the Second Division as well as the Captain of the Detention Unit, Kisuke Urahara.
Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
Anime & Comics · ZenpaiTrans
what are you on about??? In the next chapter he mentions the timeline is 200 years before the start of the storyline...
In the recent hundred years, the war between Soul Society and the Wandenreich was intense, and the Wandenreich Expeditionary Force had become a real meat grinder.
Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
Anime & Comics · ZenpaiTrans
Wow this is... not well written. Author should try and break this kind of dialogue up so that it flows more naturally in conversation. Something like "You don't even remember your parents!" "Parents?" "Your mother and father... they..." "They what?" "They died!... Last year, on a trip to your homeland, Brazil, the plane they rented crashed! But you can't even remember them!" etc etc etc... Just some kind of example, so you don't get that unnatural dialogue segments...
"Oh my God... I'm sorry Kazu-kun... Your name is Kazuki Mendes Kurosawa, you're 18 years old, your father is Brazilian, and your mother is Japanese. You lived in Brazil most of your life, but this year, six months ago to be more precise, your parents died in a plane crash." She said with sadness in her eyes, almost crying again, but I interrupted her before I had to wait another 10 minutes to continue listening to her.
Level Up in Highschool of the Dead
Anime & Comics · KanmuruZ
Sonido is not a 'Hollow' ability, rather an 'Arrancar' ability
[Sonido: Movement technique
Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde
Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter
Again, how is he moving fast? Even Luffy at the start of the show wasn't able to move very quickly, regardless of how strong he was...
Just when Tsunade and Sakura were about to rush towards the kid, they saw him disappearing from the middle of the tigers, and an air-cutting sound spread around.
Boruto: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Knightwind
The day before, he was a normal person, the literal next day he wants to have an exciting 'life or death' battle?
Satoshi wasn't afraid as he concentrated his Observation Haki on these three tigers, ready for an exciting life and death battle.
Boruto: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Knightwind
How though? How is he moving from tree to tree. Ninjas can do that through the use of chakra on their feet to keep them balanced....
A figure wearing a dark cloak leaped from tree to tree, moving forward constantly, and his dark pupils under the mask had a look of expectation.
Boruto: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Knightwind
How though? Law isn't inherently fast. He's strong, but throughout the show he's only ever moved quickly through the use of 'Room'...
After looking around one last time, Satoshi flashed disappearing in the dark forest.
Boruto: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Knightwind
"Horrified"? Really?
Both of them were horrified seeing the situation before them but before they could do anything, the child once again disappeared turning into an afterimage appearing before one of the other tigers.
Boruto: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Knightwind
Just take a drag, no pressure
What was he doing when he was 4, throwing drags everywhere, but his son despite being so young could think so deep.
Boruto: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Knightwind
Not sure Author understands what 'Daily' means...
"Ding! [Daily System Task: Run laps around the village early morning to your limit and practice your sword skills for the next 2 years, Reward: 0.02% Template Integration/day]"
Boruto: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Knightwind
Surprisingly good and fleshed out. Pace is fast, and skips a lot of the character development, however enough key scenes are staged to keep the reader hooked
I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)
Movies · BarCalak