UnholyGiriko

5mth

Replied to UnholyGiriko

Ohh, I just noticed, this was supposed to be a five star, I might have press the wrong one by accident. How do I edit it?

In another world with the crafting system

Fantasy · DemonGodHiatus

UnholyGiriko

5mth

Posted

I would like to share my experience with this story, as it has ended and years has passed ever since I started reading this. In all honesty, at the start of the story, I was having an 'icky' feeling because of how Will (MC) behaves, which may deter others from continuing in reading the story, however, as you go on and read further, you will grow attach to Will, sure it may sometimes be cringe or you might have different ways on doing things. But, this is what made me feel fond to Will, because of his ways. The writing is fine, you can visualize what's happening and sense the emotions on the text. World building is great, it portrays what's happening, how it turned to be, it answered some questions that I had, although there were some that is still a mystery to me. (Seas were only talked about at the last part, but I guess it didn't serve anything to the story.) All in all, I recommend this story to anyone. If you read this, please do give it a try. There are other things that I want to tell, but due to this being my first time making a review and english not being my native language, I couldn't form words or sentences that I wanted to share about this story, so pardon me for my lackluster review.

In another world with the crafting system

Fantasy · DemonGodHiatus

UnholyGiriko

5mth

Commented

Thank you so much for bringing this story to life, although it saddens me that this is the end. But, it brings a smile on my face thinking of the times I was waiting night after night for the next chapter. Take care, and I'll be wishing you for success and accompanying you on your future works. All good things will come to an end, but the memories will continue to live on inside my heart. P.S: Will there be a continuation of this story? I hope it does, I really want to see if the elves and humans befriend each other, what happened to Valerie, will they see Alex again, what will happen 18 or 19 years after the story, and to see the adventures of Will again.

ch 131 William Connor (end)

In another world with the crafting system

Fantasy · DemonGodHiatus

UnholyGiriko

8mth

Replied to couch2002

Blaize got the sea stone removed by the lady that has vacuum power(?), She was a member of the Spider (Don't remember what the group is called, I skimmed it too) Blaize also used it in the fight with the chimera ants.

ch 193 I am Back!

Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack

Anime & Comics · FanficMortal

UnholyGiriko

1yr

Commented

Thank you for making thia novel, your work made me satisfied and a lot of anticipation for the next chapter; I won't lie, there was also a pinch of annoyance with cliffhangers. This help me go through my day when I was bored had nothing else to do, I am quite saddened that I am making this comment as a farewell and thank you. I wish you great success with your future endeavors!

ch 126 The strongest human vs The strongest Goblin

The Player? Surviving in Terraria as the only existence

Video Games · Jarron7

UnholyGiriko

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter!

ch 102 Re-building

In another world with the crafting system

Fantasy · DemonGodHiatus

UnholyGiriko

1yr

Commented

REVENGEEEEEE!!!!!

ch 101 Revenge - Fallen kingdom

In another world with the crafting system

Fantasy · DemonGodHiatus

UnholyGiriko

1yr

Replied to BlackIight

The D

ch 88 Chapter 88 - I might be a princess, but am still human

Avatar: Awakened Gamer

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

UnholyGiriko

1yr

Commented

I'm glad that I didn't give up on waiting, now I can see this glorious day

ch 84 Chapter 84: We Are Equal

Avatar: Awakened Gamer

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

UnholyGiriko

2yr

Commented

This paragraph doesn't make any sense to me, wouldn't that just make the grandma nag to her more? To me it just sounds dumb

"Remember a month ago when I asked your help to trick your grandmother into thinking I was committing incest? Because she wouldn't stop nagging me about finding another husband?"

In another world with the crafting system

Fantasy · DemonGodHiatus

UnholyGiriko

2yr

Commented

AAAACCCCHOOOO

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Reincarnated As A Wolf With Cheats

Fantasy · 1st_Manga_KING

UnholyGiriko

2yr

Replied to Ghost_84

ch 40 Chapter 40 – Enkidu's Dream: Is Death Inevitable?

Reborn as Thor!

Anime & Comics · Ghost_84

UnholyGiriko

2yr

Commented

MOM!! I CAN'T PAUSE AN ONLINE GAME!

Chapter 1: Pause

Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Renovator

UnholyGiriko

2yr

Replied to Ghost_84

Praise to thee, for giving us this magnificent news

ch 38 Chapter 38 - When the beast becomes a man!

Reborn as Thor!

Anime & Comics · Ghost_84

UnholyGiriko

2yr

Commented

NOOOOOOO, GIVE ME MOOOOAAARRRR

Well, that's all folks!

Reborn as Thor!

Anime & Comics · Ghost_84

UnholyGiriko

2yr

Replied to I_Am_L_72

Don't mind me I was just testing if I can't edit my comment

"Of course, I want to help my lover do the dishes," it was the perfect time to be with her so Xiao Tian wouldn't let it slide.

illicit relationship

Realistic · Shooting_Star

UnholyGiriko

2yr

Replied to

Meep

"Of course, I want to help my lover do the dishes," it was the perfect time to be with her so Xiao Tian wouldn't let it slide.

illicit relationship

Realistic · Shooting_Star

UnholyGiriko

2yr

Commented

I know I'm 1 year late but it will not stop me from saying HAREM!

[With how the story is, being that nothing can beat Hiroto, would you want to see more slice of life (SOL) or romance come up? Or should I just keep going with this pace and continue the story along, adding tidbits of SOL and romance along the way? Also, Harem or No Harem? Pick your poison.]