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Great Novel. Really liked the story and everything.... It's just that the plot and the characters are so stupid sometimes. 1. King spends fortune to summon a hero. And while every other hero is insanely strong this one seems to be weak. Instead of thinking that the hero might have undiscovered powers and continue his investment, he decides to throw everything he spent on away and treat the hero as if he is worthless. I'm not going to blame him for his actions because the hero truly is an exception and not the type of hero someone would want to have, but letting him get away without doing anything. Letting him just leave after all the money invested into him is stupid. At least make him a slave or something. He just disrespects the king and the king just gets angry and allows him to joint he opposing force. Well, not my cup of tea. 2. Somehow, the hero with nothing to his name enters a drinking contest and loses. However, not only does he not have to pay anything like a loser, someone the owner covers his tab and offers him a 50% discount on everything. Even though he a Lv1 noob, somehow he scares everyone with his supposed aura. Eventually, he not only gets free food and lodgings, someone else is paying for it. Well yeah, I understand being a hero has its perks, but why do they not care about him being a leech. 3. Soon, he happens to come across a merchant who gives free soul artifacts which are supposedly super expensive and rare. He gets two based on giving the knowledge of how to use them and a favor. The dealer just gives them away. The fact that the protagonist has so much plot armor to get OP artifacts at the beginning at no cost is just stupid. NO written agreements. NO trial. NOthing. It's just stupid that he soon also gets a super rare, 8/9 star fox that supposedly can bring down nations. It just is stupid at that point at how much the author is attempting to give you free stuff. It's just not even cool anymore. The characters are literally his doormats, just somehow trusting him and giving him free stuff along the way. Stupid characters acting as antagonists and a stupid protagonist who cannot control his temper. But let me tell the truth, his writing is very good and entertaining. It's just a bit forced and I cannot stomach that much plot armor in one sitting.

Story Development: It just seems kind of forced. It seems like he's the only moving character in a static world. He is captured at the beginning but the force who captures him isn't mentioned again for a while and their influence is quite non-existant. World Background: Lots of logical errors in size and scale of credits (The Currency) and a few other things. Its fine that he gets a ton of OP stuff but why only him? It seems like he's the only person who is using the system and everyone else is sitting on their butts, chilling, waiting for the MC to come near them before they do something productive in their life. There are a few other problems. While the characters are very good, the countries and maps are not logical. He calls the top continent (Cyphix) to be around the size of china. Well, China has roughly 700 official cities however in the book, we only learn about one in that continent. Seems a bit out of proportion. The maps are well done, but the story doesn't seem as logical in its worldbuilding. He acquires an artifact that is worth 20 million credits. Everyone is like "WOOOAAAHH", they're like that is so expensive. But then the next moment they are like can we buy twenty of your armor you took ten seconds to make from ingredients which you have a supply (Perhaps infinite of? Never is clarified) of for 200,000 credits. Of course, I have not read too many chapters but my opinion is that the world building in the beginning is not the best and therefore is most likely going to continue to be subpar at best in the future.

Very detailed. World building is very solid, and the main character shows deep critical thinking beyond the preconceived norms of most Chinese novels. While there are a few things which are not logical, you can't expect the MC to be perfect every single time. That's just not realistic. There are some complaints regarding how the novel progresses too slow, however if the author removed a lot of the worldbuilding, then the novel would not only be too short, but it would seem less realistic. And I'm glad this author didn't resort to using face-slapping to fill in the word count and add filler.