doesn't make sense to be called a prince, he shouldn't have any idea of what titles he has, so if he was trying to be respectful he should call the MC Lord due it not being a specific title.
'To eliminate... to take lives. You killed them, Prince Lucifer?'
Anime & Comics · Autistically
This is going to be a continuing theme throughout the story isn't it?
"Olografic?" The white-haired seemed to struggle a bit.
Video Games · Awaken_wolf
I honestly don't understand your character, you try to shove all this backstory down our throats about your oc, but he doesn't even seem to be effected by it, so what was the point?
"U-uh...yeah, I get that quite a lot" Ryan smiled a bit nervously.
Video Games · Awaken_wolf
no idea, I'm just getting more confused as the story goes on
"How is it just suspended in the middle of space? can people breathe inside of it? is it actually named Herta's Space Station? How do we enter there? Why does it look like a very threatening carrot?" Ryan asked as he looked at the space station through the window with amazement.
Video Games · Awaken_wolf
Look, I'm not going to tell you how to write your story, but if you write a character to be unbearable, then she will be unbearable, you have written Marcus's mother as less of an mother and more of a plot device used to steer Marcus into a certain direction, we haven't actually been given an example of her being a caring mother to Marcus which we would expect due to their "good" relationship.
There you have it for all the mother-haters stuff through eyes of sociopath who wants to build stuff and live his slice of life (there is a tag for that, too!)
Anime & Comics · Dragon15681
Let me clarify what I'm trying to say aswell, I am not saying Marcus can't have a good relationship with his parents, when you introduced his father into the story just about no one had a problem with it. The issue isn't about Marcus's character, its his mother's, you have written her as someone who believes she knows better then her son in subjects that she has no experience in and uses that as an excuse to punish Marcus. We don't care that the story is slowing down, we don't care that he's interacting more with his family and his lovers, we don't care if he's focusing on inventing. What we care about is the fact that you've written an horrible excuse of a "mother" and shoved her down our throats. Look you might not care what I have to say, but the reason I say it is because I enjoy this story.
There you have it for all the mother-haters stuff through eyes of sociopath who wants to build stuff and live his slice of life (there is a tag for that, too!)
Anime & Comics · Dragon15681
I don't want to assume, but I'm pretty sure its not that we hate mothers, you just wrote a very unlikable character and sorta thrusted her into our faces. Honestly this doesn't actually explain why Marcus goes through with everything she asks of him if his only interest is the continuation of his experiments, its pretty much an argument diectly against it. There are better ways of slowing down the story to get into the slice of life aspect, this whole mother apparently knows best bs is just annoying your readers, the grounding was bearable, "fixing heaven" was just dumb. And finally, being forced to go back to school is just the final nail in the coffin. Also saying he doesn't "have" to listen to his mother doesn't actually help when all he's done is listen to her and follow her orders.
There you have it for all the mother-haters stuff through eyes of sociopath who wants to build stuff and live his slice of life (there is a tag for that, too!)
Anime & Comics · Dragon15681
Permanently
"I haven't decided yet. Marcus. For now, assist the angels." Rose motioned towards Michael and Gabriel.
Anime & Comics · Dragon15681
Honestly, his mother is probably the most annoying character, wondering when we can get back to focusing on just Marcus and his girls
"Don't worry, Mr. Michael, my boy is quite cynical and suspicious. He became even more so after he became the leader of his faction." Rose said with a sigh. She was surprised that there were snipers deployed already.
Anime & Comics · Dragon15681
don't know why, but I couldn't really enjoy this chapter...
ch 83 Returning to the Roots, Getting Grounded
Anime & Comics · Dragon15681
oh God why must you do this? You made your bed now lie in it.
"It's about this whole situation. There are a lot of things I regret about it. Things I've done. Things that hurt people I care about. I lied and manipulated the only people I consider my friends in this world, and there was a time I never thought I would do that. The mere thought sickened me. But I did it anyway. And now, honestly, I don't know who I am anymore. I've become someone I don't recognize."
Anime & Comics · Vengeance9578
The whole story feels like its been forcibly drawn out...
It wasn't exactly wrong, Shin was exhausted, and was getting more exhausted with every second that passed. And that is exactly why he didn't have time to stop and chat. He had to end this before he passed out from exhaustion.
Anime & Comics · Vengeance9578
Wow, so that's what it feels like to actually cringe.
Even while all this was happening I was still kind of numb with how Ritsuka's fuck up almost literally possibly ended this timeline with her death, so in my stupor, I responded automatically. "Yes, Mommy?" And the rest was history.
Anime & Comics · Azazyel
yeah its pretty bad, but at least the author is trying, hopefully they thought it out properly this time.
"And what do you get in exchange?" Sirzechs asked dangerously, not liking one bit how Shin was using Rias as a pawn.
Anime & Comics · Vengeance9578
Wow, I don't think I've ever seen a more perfect description.
This book has been deleted.
Does What? More info please.
Kuroto nodded, "Mm-hmm… He has no chance of surviving!"
Anime & Comics · Alex_Clive
ah, I knew this chapter was a red flag, and hers is why.
[Welcome to the multiverse Chat room]
Anime & Comics · Niaa_
Haha, she's jealous
I pushed the phone into her waiting hands and she directly stuck her tongue out while holding the phone above it to catch all of what was gushing out. I glanced at Yuri, who was staring at the phone with a frown before her hand went to her collar that was holding her head in place to her body.
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
In my mind the Lucifer part doesn't exist, it doesn't roll off the tongue as a last name and it feels very chuuni.
"No need for that. I've made a commitment to protect this village, and I intend to see it through to the end. After all, nothing can harm what's under my protection—under Aurelius Nova Lucifer's protection."
Overlord: Evil Dragon Demon God Harem
Anime & Comics · Autistically