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I just can’t with that Mc name. Smh
Chang to “slightly bowing his head”
"High General Veradin," Scar answered respectfully, slighting bow his head.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
Reassembled means “to put back together”, you should change it to resembled.
"I see," Kieran muttered in a dazed voice. He felt the same way. The characters reassembled runes, but he was completely unfamiliar with them. However, he couldn't ignore the fact he was drawn to them.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
Call -> recall
"I understand why you said what you said earlier. You know pain and suffering as well. It seems your memories are vague, but you were of lucid mind when young. To think you call recall something like that while being so young."
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
Question -> quest
With the fallout of the question in his possession, Kieran found it hard to believe that the Arcane One approaching him was coincidental.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
Seriously I am absolutely tired of seeing this awful gif
〈System: The user's «Willpower» is rapidly increasing. If this trend continues, the user's «Will» shall begin to rise.〉
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
"You have returned. And from the severe spatial fluctuations, it was through Scar's symbol. You may go," the Gatekeeper said before closing their eyes and receding into the darkness.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
“Transverse” should be changed to “traverse”
Why? Because they required an Advanced Class just to transverse the terrain. Otherwise, it'd be a waste to visit those territories.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
Yeah they shouldn’t know his real name
"What… is Kieran doing?" Nemean muttered beside Bastion.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
Matter -> mind
"Possibly," Nemean answered with a wry chuckle. The only thing on his matter at that time was execution.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
I was hoping for the doctor to be the love interest
But considering he was already a handsome young man, Alice ultimately nodded and agreed to forgive him. After all, it wasn't like she disliked what happened; she just didn't have experience and was unfamiliar with this level of interaction.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
Answer -> ask
Luna didn't answer these questions out of insecurity; instead, she asked them because if there were indeed some insufficiencies present, she preferred for them to be highlighted so that she may do her best to deal with them.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
As soon -> and soon
Nevertheless, the party followed along as soon headed deep into the Barren Mountain Range until the setting gradually changed into a dense forest with a swampy floor and many large rocks. This environment certainly wasn't ideal for anyone who was prone to slipping. One false move and that would end up their last since environmental damage also affected players just as it could affect monsters.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
Over his sword -> over his shoulder
"We advance," Kieran commanded while gesturing for the others to follow him while slinging the Scarlet Steel Greatsword over his sword. Compared to when he first wielded the weapon, it felt incredibly light. So light that it didn't differ from how a Swordsman wielded their longswords effortlessly.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
Basal -> basic
The sins and virtue of man were two principles that governed every person despite what they may claim. No matter how hard an individual tried, it was challenging to destroy human nature at the most basic level. Those basal behaviors were bound to seep through one's actions at some moment in time.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
“Victor of the best” should be “victor of the bet”
'Without Force Slash, it's truly an unfair matchup to go against a Thief in a PvP competition,' Kieran thought to himself. However, this thought heightened Kieran's desire to emerge as the victor of the best.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
This is an awkwardly phrased joke if it was a joke at all it just seems so forced like the author wants the Mc to be funny to the other characters but doesn’t know how to
"I concur. Her aim is atrocious! I think she is conspiring to turn us into middle-aged men suffering from male pattern baldness!" Kieran added.
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Transmigration (1)
Level Up in Martial World
Eastern · Aurelius_Imperator
Why did it take so long to poison them, should have started with that.
Even after confirming that the bear was completely dead, Wang Mang sank his teeth into him just to be safe.
I Swear My Pool Don't Have A Python
Sci-fi · Pen And Dream
Demon’s diary’s existing translation is terrible! It is fine up to like chapter 290, but then it gets translated by “sassy the walk” and it’s horrendous. Basically as bad as a machine translated novel it’s so bad he calls all cultivators “alchemist”.
Demon's Diary
Eastern · Wang Yu