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............This is sooo thrilling!!! Oh my God! I can't wait for the drama to expound. Those two sibs must have done something for Latiffah to hate their guts. Their mother... hmm...what kind of betrayal is that??? Keep up the good work dear!👌👍

Despite having six chapters, you should update often. Your story has me hooked. Want to know what will happen next. Also my advice to you as a well wisher. When writing two different worlds alert us readers. It helps reduce the confusion.

You don't say. Makes me strain my eyes to find where I have reached in case I get lost

I agree with you. However look at it this way, he/she (author) seems to have written each based on a character. As in two different worlds. Upon my observation, the part of vine begins, followed by Chauncey... If I'm correct and then Eamonn. After that it relvoved between just vine and eamonn. I dunno if it's correct. It's up to the author. But he/she should make an indication of such sorts.

I agree with her

Can't wait to read more. It is so different and confusing. And every new chapter creates a game changer. Nice. I love it! Is it related to buffy the vampire slayer? You Russian?