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love the book but why did it drop down to 2 chapters a week? its and amazong book with almost no spelling errors and is extremely funny. keep writing please

ide like to say the grammar errors were caused by my phones auto correct. curse the auto correct chaos is supposed to be chaps

this story so far as hilarious I love it and hope it keeps going. not many chaos yet but sofar I havent seen any issues with any of the rating criteria. great comedy story and it feels like it will only get better

4.8 overall. ide love to give a 5 but to be fair it has a few gramer and spelling mistakes. that said its easy to decipher what the author meant. the book is great with excelent charachter development and the author describes the world and characters in a good amount of detail. unlike some stories where theres a hero type MC with no flaws this MC has a few flaws and isnt insanely over powered. the story developed at a good pace and keeps room for details and small facts that faster paced stories do not have. overall if I had to give this book a rating out of 100 it would be a 97 due to the very few writing errors. love the book myself and I would recomend others give it a try as well. also to the author, you should give us a discount cause starting from chapter 1 and getting to 400 to feel like I can give a decent review was like $60 and even though it a good book and in fine with it is cant spend that every month. love the book though keep writing ill be buying chapters whenever I can!

got really into the story then I hit the pay wall. Looks like I'm stuck at 3 chapters a day for a while...

The carachters are well developed. Updates are very frequent. Could use a little more background to the world but the read is from the MC's perspective. only complaint is sometimes the writing is strange or broken and a few misspelled words but that's forgivable, we are all human. Oh and its funny as ****, great job with the comedic factor of the story.[img=update]