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Omg, after reading I totally have an idea! I'm a previous chapter, you transcribed that a burst of red energy came out of her,ever since I've read that, I can see in the back of my mind that her beast is a pheonix, I can totally see it getting angry because of the stupid parasite. I mean c'mon it is a pheonix! How dare a parasite stop it from burning bright. I think she should meet it in a dream and then one day she tries to bring it out and the parasite retaliates,then the Phoenix gets angry and she bursts into flames and burns the parasite out of her face while healing herself becoming even more beautiful. Her beast should fly out of her body and make a loud cry twice before going back in and she.should no longer be on fire and then gracefully faint into the arms of when xaio

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needs work looking forward to more updates from this author. I need more to read in order to get invested in this book so whoever you are update! update! update!

sure,but this book stays on webnovel. i will not showcase it anywhere else as per my contract with them. my other books, you can have

I love the development of this story, although the beginning was a bit confusing for me from the start. I look forward to completing reading your book!

Book could use a lot of work. Nevertheless it is a work in progess. I look forward to the authors maturity in developing this story. This story is not bad but could use a lot of work. We the readers need to know more about the characters and their attitudes. We also need to know what they look like. Also what is Amber's backstory.