I know it isn't good to write a bad review because of the hard work you put into it and I appreciate you for it, it's not right to judge it with those famous books but I am just venting out my frustrations. First: I don't like character development. Characters are too naive, and Aiden, wtf is wrong with him? He is plain stupid, always getting manipulated and getting in troubles and thanking for that. And all that powers coming from the system, what is the need for all that? Show off? Fk, it is like --> angry 😤(I am gonna kill all those bastards)> then comes Master/ Granny, "no dearie, you should be patient and let them fk you and you should let them go because we need to be benevolent"-->then, " Yes yes granny/master, you are right", he nods his head like an obedient dipst. Fk, happening every time. 2nd Lily: I don't understand what naivety has to do with cuteness, sure some naiveness is good but not to the point of being stupid. And 3 Number: the heck is she, she is such a manipulative b. Always getting away with every wrong decision she makes in the name of good. The heck? There is a saying " An intelligent enemy is better than a stupid friend". It makes perfect sense. I don't know if it will improve if I read further on, just hoping that it doesn't disappoint me. I am just giving a review, sure I would care only about myself, because it's me that I am trying to entertain, so I should have been selfish in giving the review, but I just couldn't control my frustration.
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original The Skill Orchard
In a world of soaring swords and legendary sects, one man cultivates quietly among cucumbers. Ash, a nameless recluse living in a forgotten village, wants no fame, no fortune—just peace, edible vegetables, and maybe a body strong enough to open jars without groaning. But when a mysterious, logic-bending system called the Skill Orchard sprouts in his mind, everything changes… slowly. And with a lot of carrots. The Skill Orchard doesn’t grant instant power. It rewards creativity, effort, and a strange sense of humor. Cooking the right meal might strengthen his bones. Yelling at a tomato might awaken its soul. And swinging a hoe in just the right mood? That might create a skill strong enough to fight spirit beasts. Eventually. As Ash stumbles through farming, odd encounters, and baffling chicken attacks, his quiet life begins to ripple through the cultivation world—without him ever leaving his garden. Slice-of-life meets subtle overpowered progression in a cultivation novel where strength grows one weird, wonderful skill at a time.25 Chs 0 Collections
Yes, it got better as I read. I am a slow Reader since I can't find that much of free time.
The Last Primal
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