NorthenStar

NorthenStar

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2020-12-18 Joined United Kingdom
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NorthenStar
NorthenStar
3 months ago
Posted

i can accept a lot if a novel has potential but the author literally is ending the dance of the dragon, 1 a male heir (fixed and anyone who knows understands) 2 Daemon married to Rheanyra ( fixes legitimate heir problems) and now you can make any excuses but it will make no sense to start the war. this is not a og novel and don't expect it to not change but this change is the worst

NorthenStar
NorthenStar
2 years ago
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"Argh!" Lucian cried out in pain. Which ended up angering him. He pulled out the spear from his shoulder and pulled on it while taking a step back pulling the Makhai forward.

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3

NorthenStar
NorthenStar
2 years ago
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He tied his long black hair into a messy bun and smiled at himself in the mirror, "Looking good! Must be another power of being a demi-god" he said to himself while looking at his four canine like teeth giving him a tiny bit of a savage look.

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3

NorthenStar
NorthenStar
2 years ago
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"Okay Lucy Listen and Listen well cause I don't have much time. I left you some money under the floorboard in my room next to my bed. It should last you a few years if you spend it wisely. It has both mortal money and Drachma.

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3

NorthenStar
NorthenStar
2 years ago
Commented

Good luck

NorthenStar
NorthenStar
3 years ago
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NorthenStar
NorthenStar
3 years ago
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NorthenStar
NorthenStar
3 years ago
Commented

hopefully the writing style improves

NorthenStar
NorthenStar
3 years ago
Posted

Great potential for a novel as well having amazing update times. The downside is writing style is poor, mainly the constant us of bro, etc and Mc cocky attitude

NorthenStar
NorthenStar
3 years ago
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(Author's notes: First, press F for Cao Cao.)

Before I Died, I Kissed Rias Gremory

Before I Died, I Kissed Rias Gremory

Anime & Comics · SoftCrow