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thanks you for the journey. this story is great. all of your story are great. keep going. let's go to the next story. Let's go ahead!!!!

the intraction with 3 digimon is very minimum. i hope the intraction between the trainer and the 3 digimon can be show more in the story. each type of digimon has their ouw character and they also expess their feeling. they can talk after all.

take your time. my friend. worry not cause i am going to wait your update without complain. do what your live need. just give some of your time to finish this story oke. XD

get well soon

calm down wijaya he is only translating new story not making a new one. so he will make it i guess.

harem posibility? i like it.

sword of nine sun 1st: infernal sword imbune your sword with high concentrait fire and increase penetration of sword. (more higher your cultivation more higher the temperature/degre and more easly penetrait enemy defends. 2nd: sun breath passive spirit skill. repelish stamina in the fight. impove strength and agility. 3rd: fire step boost your step like a rocket (need some training to use it) 4th: ring of fire like a pit to fight and prevent enemy to run. 5th: uncountrollable fire every swing of your sword produce fire to attack enemy but becareful u can aim your fire to the enemy but the area around you or the area around your enemy you aim can be on fire unpredictably. 6th: sun teleportation. as long as under the sun u can go whereever you want. limit to the place he already visit or in a dangerous situation u can just active it to run but the place u go will be random. cast time : 10 (when u are not in a hurry and knok where u want to go). insta cast: 2 s when in dangerous situation and in a hurry to run. 7th: sword of nine sun avatar bankai of ryu jakka. everything burn to ashes even its soul. bonus effect: enable attack immaterial thing like soul or other ting + awaken the absolute fire element. 8th: domain of fire the areas around you burn with fire without exexcaption 9th: the dawn of the nine sun. summon nine sun to aid u in the fight. more like apocalypse. improve overall fire power 9 times to all fire relate spirit skill. bonus effect everything under the 9 sun will be domain of fire.

corrosive skin his skin produce corrosive poison.

flood phyton and sword of nine sun. when i think about how his fight style later and if he can use them at the same time. flood phyton evolve to sun chaser emperor phyton (explaination: flood phyton matrial soul + immortal herb(poison+fire)+effect from sword of nine sun). u dont need to make it became dragon cause not all dragon strong. its more effective if u make it can aid him in battle when the snake became avatar? skill: 2nd: strangle improve strength and flexcibility of hand,foot, and body to strangle and restrain enemy. maybe he can became a bit more flexxible to evade in close combat fight. like orochimaru in naruto series. 3rd: corrosive skin (passive) his skin produce corrosive skin. everything that get touch by phyton skin will hit by corrosive skin. (maybe can even corrode tang san secret weapon at the later stage) (active) improve defends 4th: stealth body improve agility and strength. (remove sound when u move, more harder to catch with normal eyes sight) 5th: snake clone 3 clone aid him to fight/train/learn/cultivate. when destroyed will became a lot of snake that attack/bite nearest enemy(poisonous of course). like orochimaru in naruto series. 6th: emperor gaze (passive) make him immune to spiritual attack. (active) when enemy see his eyes they will stun (more like spiritual attack). 7th: sun chaser emperor phyton avatar manifestation of his matrial soul. has his own conciusness can use spirit skill. 8th: conqueror domain. weakening enemy strength, agility, defend, and spirit. like conqueror haki from one piece 9th: petrified attack (passive) every attack that hit make the became stone. (even when when he use sword) its like boa hancock power from one piece.

wow, u reallr new math.

but u did great. its make me love your story and its make me hard to complain. maybe more update?

keep going man. thank for your work.

up to you, but don't mess up the story

keep going young man. I trust you. don't blindly trust suggestions. some make the story not yours. you are good, keep going and complete the story, you will become amazing.

can u not using italic? i can't read some word. and it's something that make me depressed.

nice