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I'm aware of my own sagacity but thank you regardless.
I don't think that's likely tbh.
Every week, the business would deliver the small pieces of clay to the banks and get the money.
Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Based
At least not until you two are married."
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
Probably, but "or" can be pronounced like "er" sometimes, such as in "doctor," "author," "color," etc. And Pator isn't a common name, so i still have no idea how to pronounce it. Thx for trying to help tho.
"My name's Pator Tailor, sir. Please, refer to me as Pator."
Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Thank you, but that doesn't help. Is it a long a like "pay tor" or a short a like "pat tor"? Is the t sharp or soft like "pat tor" or "patter"? Is the or pronounced like "or" (as I think it should be) or "er"?
"My name's Pator Tailor, sir. Please, refer to me as Pator."
Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach
How do you pronounce Pator?
"My name's Pator Tailor, sir. Please, refer to me as Pator."
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Fantasy · Warmaisach
This just puts such a foul, foul, foul taste in my mouth. Wish i was kidding when i say I'm considering dropping the book bc of it.
ch 176 Chapter 176 – Not a Problem
Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach
That number seems EXTREMELY high.
Well, if one were to use the guy as a reference, Nick would be a man weighing about 240 kilos with a low body fat percentage.
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Fantasy · Warmaisach
Kind of hard to read with the formatting but seems right. Good job my dude.
So, if an Initial Hatchling had a power of 1, an Early Hatchling would have 1.5, a Mid Hatchling would have about 2.3, a Late Hatchling would have about 3.4, and a Peak Hatchling would have about 5.
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Unfortunate
"Then, I would like to work with the Dreamer right now," Jenny said. "Although, I need to inform my partner at home first. She hasn't heard from me the entire day, and she will be very worried if I stay until deep into the night."
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nope
"Then, I would like to work with the Dreamer right now," Jenny said. "Although, I need to inform my partner at home first. She hasn't heard from me the entire day, and she will be very worried if I stay until deep into the night."
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Fantasy · Warmaisach
These adjectives feel a little redundant and unnecessarily repetitive
Even though he had just slept for eight hours, he felt very exhausted and tired.
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Fantasy · Warmaisach
That's what i say when I'm in your mother's bed.
'I'm fucking retarded!'
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Fantasy · Warmaisach
More communist tendencies
'I am essentially taking money from someone without doing anything. Isn't that like stealing? I mean, I didn't do anything.'
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Fantasy · Warmaisach
More like execution actually.
"This is the most popular and famous torture method from the old world!" the torturer said. "We found many depictions of this torture method in the ruins."
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Just because a duty is unperformed does not mean it is not a duty.
'Someone that has the power to change something should have a duty to change things.'
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Fantasy · Warmaisach
How on earth do you pronounce that?
"My name's Pator Tailor, sir. Please, refer to me as Pator."
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Fantasy · Warmaisach
The world building seems a bit odd here. Restricted communication makes sense, but completely blocked communication over distances? They need rather advanced technology to make a lot of what they have (like the containment units), and that likely included at least basic computer technology, right? Or is this specific hospital out of the loop for some reason?
Every week, the business would deliver the small pieces of clay to the banks and get the money.
Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Is it hyperbolic or a pyramid? If both, how is it both?
The structure was a humongous curvy pyramid in the shape of a hyperbola. It was made of reflective metal and was nearly two kilometers high and five kilometers wide.
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Fantasy · Warmaisach
You don't need satellites for local computers and servers.
Every week, the business would deliver the small pieces of clay to the banks and get the money.
Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach