his-> her
Ye Zhiqu spoke to Ye Feng, but her tone was very gentle.
Book&Literature · Green Mountain Summer Moon
POV are mismatched.
As we pushed through the door, raging beats from speakers mounted to the ceiling rained down on me. A blast of amber light blinded me for but a moment, until my vicinity clamped down on my emotions. Yells, cheers, everything you could possibly hear in an underground fight club, was practically screamed at the top of somebody's lungs.
Fantasy · stickbUg
this chap screamed of jhon wick..
ch 43 The new beginning
Fantasy · Superfabinho
it should be kargas not viztar
So, instead of Viztar's neck, Kargas ducked below the arm that reached in his direction, shifted his serrated dagger-like sword to his other hand, and sliced Viztar's ankle. Viztar's green flames singed the very tips of Kargas' hair, but in exchange, Viztar landed a blow to one of Viztar's legs. If this continued, they could destabilize him.
Fantasy · armordillo
when did they became friends?🤔
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Fantasy · Superfabinho
sakuna?
Ability Description: Dismantle is an ability that allows the user to deliver an invisible slash within a radius of up to 20 meters. The level of penetration and the range of the ability can be increased depending on the user's mana.
Fantasy · Superfabinho
what nonsense is this?
'It's good... since the main character is by my side, at least I'll be safe for now.'
Fantasy · HikaruKiki
He->She
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Fantasy · Martialdaoist
grammar error...
"Perhaps, has I become a Djinn?" She grits her teeth in self-hate at the unwanted development.
Book&Literature · Alfir
points are the same as before....
[Taoyun: 4122 points.]
Eastern · Autumn comes after night rain
why not make the fox into the spirit soul rather than just getting the spirit ring from the the leopard....
The Fox squatted down and looked at the soul ring on the Resplendent Golden Leopard, seemingly suggesting that Wang Feng could absorb it and it has no intention of fighting. Understanding the Fox's meaning, Wang Feng smiled and decided to proceed. He sat cross-legged, eyes focused on the soul ring as excitement filled his heart.
Anime & Comics · PrimorDious
please proofread this lot of spell mistake.
'It seems like he loved her,' She thought while getting off the flying ship they were on. Indeed, Ling Han loved the princess. before his talent was made known to him or his clan, he and the princess were childhood friends, and as they grew up they were close. the betrayer came out of nowhere, it felt like a dream, and everything was just too hard to recall. what made things worse was after joining the sect, Ling Han found that the Ling Han had been destroyed, and every member was slaughtered due to them scheming for the thrown.
Anime & Comics · itachi1010
jeans? in a cultivation world????...
Ling Han was called onto the stage, and there everyone watched a young man wearing a jacket, long jeans, and a blindfold stepping onto the stage. everyone watched this scene in shock, such clothing was considered mortal clothing. such clothing limited an expert movement and brought no enhancement, other than looking cool, they were dumb. instantly, everyone's impression of Ling Han dropped, it dropped even more seeing that eased smile.
Anime & Comics · itachi1010
jeans? in a cultivation world????...
Ling Han was called onto the stage, and there everyone watched a young man wearing a jacket, long jeans, and a blindfold stepping onto the stage. everyone watched this scene in shock, such clothing was considered mortal clothing. such clothing limited an expert movement and brought no enhancement, other than looking cool, they were dumb. instantly, everyone's impression of Ling Han dropped, it dropped even more seeing that eased smile.
Anime & Comics · itachi1010
repeat
, but the woman with the rough demeanor hardly looked like a smuggler.
Anime & Comics · NewComer714
repeat
Ignoring Mr.5's demeanor and explosive ability, which indeed suited the role of a mercenary or even a terrorist, Mr.3 as a loan shark was somewhat believable
Anime & Comics · NewComer714
He repeated same answer to three different questions....
"It's true, he assigned his men to contact us. But with the Unlucky Duo here, it was easy to uncover his involvement."
Anime & Comics · NewComer714
it should be Tom not Adrian
Adrian decided to do something he could do himself, which was to rescue Camie. As the battle raged on, he walked casually across the battlefield towards Camie's bag, looking as if he were taking a stroll in his own backyard.
Anime & Comics · NewComer714
confirmed...this has windbreaker mixed in
And now Ekko was the owner of his very own hot spring." Shells going to be so jealous when she visits." Ekko gained with newfound happiness as he did his best to make sure the hot springs looked brand new and presentable.
Anime & Comics · TotherWindow1
similar to shadow heart ❤️[img=recommend]
To put it in simpler terms. He decided to not make a core anymore, instead, he will just make his heart into one instead.
Jujutsu Kaisen: The Traveller
Anime & Comics · Evrabonzz