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2020-12-19 Joined Global

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similar to shadow heart ❤️[img=recommend]

To put it in simpler terms. He decided to not make a core anymore, instead, he will just make his heart into one instead. 

Jujutsu Kaisen: The Traveller

Jujutsu Kaisen: The Traveller

Anime & Comics · Evrabonzz

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Vishal_Dulange
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POV are mismatched.

As we pushed through the door, raging beats from speakers mounted to the ceiling rained down on me. A blast of amber light blinded me for but a moment, until my vicinity clamped down on my emotions. Yells, cheers, everything you could possibly hear in an underground fight club, was practically screamed at the top of somebody's lungs. 

Prince of Sentinels

Prince of Sentinels

Fantasy · stickbUg

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it should be kargas not viztar

So, instead of Viztar's neck, Kargas ducked below the arm that reached in his direction, shifted his serrated dagger-like sword to his other hand, and sliced Viztar's ankle. Viztar's green flames singed the very tips of Kargas' hair, but in exchange, Viztar landed a blow to one of Viztar's legs. If this continued, they could destabilize him.

Rogue Villain

Rogue Villain

Fantasy · armordillo

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when did they became friends?🤔

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The Author’s Paradox

The Author’s Paradox

Fantasy · Superfabinho

Vishal_Dulange
Commented

sakuna?

Ability Description: Dismantle is an ability that allows the user to deliver an invisible slash within a radius of up to 20 meters. The level of penetration and the range of the ability can be increased depending on the user's mana.

The Author’s Paradox

The Author’s Paradox

Fantasy · Superfabinho

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Commented

what nonsense is this?

'It's good... since the main character is by my side, at least I'll be safe for now.'

The supporting character's harem is very normal

The supporting character's harem is very normal

Fantasy · HikaruKiki

Vishal_Dulange
Commented

He->She

Vishal_Dulange
Commented

grammar error...

"Perhaps, has I become a Djinn?" She grits her teeth in self-hate at the unwanted development.

The Novel's Extra Nobody

The Novel's Extra Nobody

Book&Literature · Alfir

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Vishal_Dulange
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why not make the fox into the spirit soul rather than just getting the spirit ring from the the leopard....

The Fox squatted down and looked at the soul ring on the Resplendent Golden Leopard, seemingly suggesting that Wang Feng could absorb it and it has no intention of fighting. Understanding the Fox's meaning, Wang Feng smiled and decided to proceed. He sat cross-legged, eyes focused on the soul ring as excitement filled his heart.

Sign-In in Douluo Dalu.

Sign-In in Douluo Dalu.

Anime & Comics · PrimorDious

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Commented

please proofread this lot of spell mistake.

'It seems like he loved her,' She thought while getting off the flying ship they were on. Indeed, Ling Han loved the princess. before his talent was made known to him or his clan, he and the princess were childhood friends, and as they grew up they were close. the betrayer came out of nowhere, it felt like a dream, and everything was just too hard to recall. what made things worse was after joining the sect, Ling Han found that the Ling Han had been destroyed, and every member was slaughtered due to them scheming for the thrown.

The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World

The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World

Anime & Comics · itachi1010

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jeans? in a cultivation world????...

Ling Han was called onto the stage, and there everyone watched a young man wearing a jacket, long jeans, and a blindfold stepping onto the stage. everyone watched this scene in shock, such clothing was considered mortal clothing. such clothing limited an expert movement and brought no enhancement, other than looking cool, they were dumb. instantly, everyone's impression of Ling Han dropped, it dropped even more seeing that eased smile.

The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World

The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World

Anime & Comics · itachi1010

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Commented

jeans? in a cultivation world????...

Ling Han was called onto the stage, and there everyone watched a young man wearing a jacket, long jeans, and a blindfold stepping onto the stage. everyone watched this scene in shock, such clothing was considered mortal clothing. such clothing limited an expert movement and brought no enhancement, other than looking cool, they were dumb. instantly, everyone's impression of Ling Han dropped, it dropped even more seeing that eased smile.

The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World

The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World

Anime & Comics · itachi1010

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Commented

repeat

, but the woman with the rough demeanor hardly looked like a smuggler. 

I summoned Tom at the start in One Piece World

I summoned Tom at the start in One Piece World

Anime & Comics · NewComer714

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Commented

repeat

Ignoring Mr.5's demeanor and explosive ability, which indeed suited the role of a mercenary or even a terrorist, Mr.3 as a loan shark was somewhat believable 

I summoned Tom at the start in One Piece World

I summoned Tom at the start in One Piece World

Anime & Comics · NewComer714

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Commented

He repeated same answer to three different questions....

"It's true, he assigned his men to contact us. But with the Unlucky Duo here, it was easy to uncover his involvement."

I summoned Tom at the start in One Piece World

I summoned Tom at the start in One Piece World

Anime & Comics · NewComer714

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Commented

it should be Tom not Adrian

Adrian decided to do something he could do himself, which was to rescue Camie. As the battle raged on, he walked casually across the battlefield towards Camie's bag, looking as if he were taking a stroll in his own backyard.

I summoned Tom at the start in One Piece World

I summoned Tom at the start in One Piece World

Anime & Comics · NewComer714

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Commented

confirmed...this has windbreaker mixed in

And now Ekko was the owner of his very own hot spring." Shells going to be so jealous when she visits." Ekko gained with newfound happiness as he did his best to make sure the hot springs looked brand new and presentable.

Transported to a parallel fictional world

Transported to a parallel fictional world

Anime & Comics · TotherWindow1

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