Kori_Seegrist - Profile

By far the best story I’ve ever read on here. You could tell that there were multiple translators translating though. If there weren’t then it’s just a lack of organization on the only translators part like the names of the gene levels from first to second to third sanctuaries. Other than that I thoroughly believe this could be an extremely successful video game (mmorpg) or even just a single player rpg.

I love how ther is the incorporation of multiple mythologies and how in early chapters you used definitions and backstories to help the reader better understand certain things or characters