Webnovel Author: min_jasmine - Novel Collection

I put a quarter of stars on the world design only because I don't like this type of world very much, sorry In addition to that, the story is wonderful. I love that the hero of the story is not a white lotus like other novels, and in addition, his internal expressions are very wonderful.

The story is so sweet I like the way you blend the imagination into this world and the perfect way of describing it for me and I'm slowly starting to fall in love with it ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you for telling me, actually, as i said, English is not my native language, I usually use a translator, and I try to proofread as much as possible, but that's not enough, it seems, I don't have the money for an editor, so that's all I can do 🥺🥺 Anyway thank you very much

Thank you very much for your honest review. I am very grateful .. In fact, the classification of the Glosali novel is not a horror for you. I did not find a more suitable classification for it other than this. The novel is considered an investigation, but certainly not a horror If you see a more appropriate classification, please let me know I will work on your advice and expand the description of the world. Thanks again

I have read several chapters of it so far and I liked it as not to lie, the first chapter was very boring for me, but after reaching the second chapter, I found that the events became better and more interesting As for the character of the hero, I feel that his acceptance of the idea that he was a murderer was rather quick but still acceptable.. In short, the novel is nice and you may enjoy it when you have free time (note: i fell in love with the old man)

Nice story At first I thought it was the same routine betrayal scene but somehow it was for redemption, I didn't know who I should be angry at. keep up your hard work

In fact, I liked the way you presented a novel and built great expectations on it But my expectations were all wrong. The novel is much better than I expected The character of the hero or the way you blend the present and the past...everything is great[img = يوصي]

Your writing style is perfect, I don't see any flaws, whether in the description or the development of events But why does a weak omega have to live all this? I got to the fifth chapter and I feel like my eyes are already burning me Looks like I'll cry soon

The novel is very nice, I liked the character of Raziel and his friend It's amazing how you combined the narration and the description It made me feel like I'm living events (your style is perfect)

Yes Babylon song is very wonderful The strange thing is that he is singing a slightly similar English song that I didn't know about except in the comments It's nice to hear the song

Yes, I am a person who is hostile to sad endings - unless it is necessary - I might make you cry the whole story but I'll give a decent ending