Zachary_Whitney - Profile

Enjoyable story with good characters and an interesting setting the Dungeon building aspect is honestly my favorite part my only complaint on that is how short those parts actually are id like to see a better balance between the adventure and dungeon building, other than that my only complaint is the short amount of chapters uploaded id like to see more. Overall I do believe this novel is worth supporting and am eager to see where it goes.

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This is an interesting story so far with a good concept and foundation it's also something I'd enjoy more but can't because of how the novel has been translated it is actually dragging down the overall story and quality due to a lot being lost in translation. The grammar and sentence structure is confusing, disorderly and is just so chaotic to say the least. I'm not sure if this story just isn't edited properly but the english translation has been lack luster and I'd be willing to rate this much higher if I didnt feel the need to have to hire a personal translator just to make heads or tails of some of the dialogue. If the author is willing and able to fix the issues stated above id gladly give this a 4 star minimum.