tip: don't use the same words in a single sentence
Healer: "Your body should be fine to move now but you still need to rest, the goddess will want to speak to both of you immediately so please go to her immediately."
Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
sure suits yourself
Class : [Muramasa Descendant]
Anime & Comics · Tatsuke44
i REALLY like your fanfic, and was an old reader of it , so I am warning you that you are making mc too op, this is the same mistake you did in the bleach world, the mc is calculative and manipulative , but those traits will not shine if you give really powerful abilities like this. I know that this is your fanfic, and you can do anything, you can make him op without giving him a golden spoon like this.
ch 12 Surrender
Anime & Comics · Aizen_Dleitch
that's not class
Class : [Muramasa Descendant]
Anime & Comics · Tatsuke44
that pun.... physically hurt me.
A boy with purple hair could be seen swimming back to the shore. He had fair skin, lean and compact muscles and had a handsome face with some baby fat. This was Akihiko who had grown in the last 2 years. He was now 4'3 and was taller than most of his friends.
Anime & Comics · SupremeCookie
if you do send him to any game please do it in moderation
ch 10 A Reliable Tool
Anime & Comics · Aizen_Dleitch
Blake nodded with a slight smile as she stood up and left Shen's room. As she walked down the hall, she didn't notice her mind had been partially corrupted by Shen.
Anime & Comics · Aizen_Dleitch
not criticizing you or anything, but i think you should double think before giving him op abilities
Shen noticed that he had also become a Demon-Hybrid. 'My blood must be messed up right now.' He was a Hybrid of two different races at this point, and it was only making him stronger. Though he definitely didn't want to know what would happen if he ever had a kid. "In any case I'm excited to see what my Devil Trigger can do. I should test it outs-"
Anime & Comics · Aizen_Dleitch
i think you should really give him weak abilities or weapons so that he could learn how to properly use it himself, if your already giving him op abilities, this might end up like your previous version of universal villain.
While he wasn't the biggest fan of DMC, he still loved the two games he played, DMC 4 and 5. And through them and a lot of reading when it came to lore, he knew just how powerful Devil Triggers were. 'Looks like Video Games were the way to go. Alright, let's try this one more time.' He had another spin and was feeling confident after getting such a powerful ability.
Anime & Comics · Aizen_Dleitch
*riyo gudako would like to know your location*
Gacha: This will allow the user access to a special menu to gamble using any form of currency as long as it is found adequate. After selecting a category, a random number of selections from that category will be put onto a roulette. When spun, the user will get whatever the spin lands on.
Anime & Comics · Aizen_Dleitch
no, the police force were normal humans, he will get higher EXP when he will inevitably face a huntsman.
Looking at his EXP Shen didn't know whether to laugh or cry. All that work was for the recognition of the White Fang, but at the same time, he was hoping it would help him Level up. But it only gave him a meager 110, which was around 1/10th of what he needed. "Fine whatever I guess I'll focus on the next best thing."
Anime & Comics · Aizen_Dleitch
that's false, pride is karna's defining feature and why he is so popular among other mahabharata heroes.
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Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine
that's Vimana.
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Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine
surya absorbed him, not the other way round
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Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine
Someone to rely on
Fantasy · obsessedWithWolves
Think! Mark!Think!
"Think, Beth! Think!" She said, hitting the side of her head.
Fantasy · obsessedWithWolves
dont worry plebian! The bonk slayer is here to rescue you!
"Master! This is sexual abuse!" The system exclaimed, horrified at her actions.
Fantasy · obsessedWithWolves
good luck next time
Name: Gáe Bolg
The Universal Villain
Anime & Comics · Aizen_Dleitch