I realize you said it was a mistake. but you really had me thinking she was also growing her shadow, as she is his sister, so the possibility was there.
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Fantasy · Guiltythree
world design is great and the story is pretty cool. Somewhere along the line the main character went from.. "Bullied weakling who is gaining power and building up those around him for a better life, and maybe some revenge on his past bullies" to becoming the bully that bullied him. That guy who sees himself as above everyone else, that only his opinion matters and everyone else should grovel at his feet and mercy. the power trip here is real. It's just getting depressing at this point.
Fantasy · Zurbluris
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too rapey world and system are great tho
Sci-fi · AllenWorker
I wanted to like this book. The world, the system, the preface. It had so much potential. only to be overshadowed/overtaken by a damaged soul that took their inferiority complex on everyone around them, diving into a disgusting sort of depravity thats shrugged off because "its consensual" ... if you want a domineering book about sexual escapades that borders the line of rape, this is the book for you. it was not for me.
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I realize you said it was a mistake. but you really had me thinking she was also growing her shadow, as she is his sister, so the possibility was there.
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Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree