Overall, this novel is great, but I can't help feel its a bit rushed. When mc needs something, someone or something shows up and helps him get it. If mc gets a material and needs a blacksmith to use it, someone in the next few paragraphs will show up and have a job related to a blacksmith. Like i said, its a good novel, but the grammar needs to be cleaned up a bit.
Fantasy · Arlemit
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Overall, this novel is great, but I can't help feel its a bit rushed. When mc needs something, someone or something shows up and helps him get it. If mc gets a material and needs a blacksmith to use it, someone in the next few paragraphs will show up and have a job related to a blacksmith. Like i said, its a good novel, but the grammar needs to be cleaned up a bit.
Nameless King
Fantasy · Arlemit