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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Why do people feel the need to nitpick every last detail of a story and then proceed to comment on said items, driving real readers crazy with their nonsense? I'm truly not trying to be ugly, but really get a life or better yet, get a job as an editor and save us from bad pronunciation and incorrect word use. Thank you, rant is over! Have a lovely, well versed day![img=recommend]

I love this grandfather! He's everything a grandfather should be. I can't wait to see what kind of mischief he gets up to. Great story Author! Keep it up!!!

Great job so far!

why stick around and be abused? . You'd think leaving after all of that would be a given, but maybe not for everyone. I would have been gone the moment he smirked at me after catching him in bed with someone else.

Right?

Wow angst much? I'm hooked!

Wow! Kind of harsh, don't ya'll think? It's only a fictional story. Definitely time to breathe...

Okay, let's do this! I gotta say even though she has no clue about anything going on around her, to her, sitting beside her....I can't wait to see what's next. Like a terrible accident on the freeway, you know you shouldn't look but you do anyway...

Darn text replacement. If...

life it looks like a duck, Walks like a duck and sounds like a duck, it's usually a duck! Your bff and your "man" are both really, really bad ducks! Always listen to your instincts. They are usually right!

Exactly, I couldn't have said it better!

I was wondering about that also.

Karma--Sweet Karma

Jealous much? What a dirty, petty, nasty, sub standard witch the new Empress is. How pathetic. Real women don't have to compromise themselves to be successful. She's the perfect for her new husband. Two of a kind they are. He's going to get exactly what he deserves right along with his wife. Because as my grandma always said, "When you lay down with dogs, you're going to get fleas". I'm definitely loving this book! You are doing a great job! Keep it up!

I'm a little confused but definitely intrigued. I love a good, angsty story. so far, so good. Let's continue.

I still want to know what her father's connection to the murferof his family...

Dear GOD! No wonder he's so angry. Now my question is what does this have to do with Tianas dad? I'm hooked!! Let's roll...

Angry much? I'm intrigued. What happened in this guys past to cause this type of behavior? You're doing good. Keep it up!!