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Commented Review chapter 23: "She was was put into more dilemma..."
ch 23 Retrospection
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Commented Punctuation marks should be corrected. Review chapter 3: I "had" to tell you,
ch 0 3 Intuition
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Commented Chapter 9: "Except Dad, everyone else will have 3 chances to guess the gift." Numeric 3 must be literal in the word.
ch 0 9 Christmas and Gifts 2
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Commented Chapter 8: "There were 2 spells to be used". Numeric 2 must be literal in words.
ch 0 8 Christmas and Gifts 1
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Commented Chapter8: It should be reviewed "This bag was invested by the famous scientists of Zeus"...
ch 0 8 Christmas and Gifts 1
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Review chapter 24: " ..... the auto-though book which she found it ..."
ch 24 Forethought
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