Love this story so far, it was a lot more fun than I expected even with that unique description of the story. The only problem I faced reading is with the flow of the story. I mean with Conversation between characters. you can try to make them synchronize to make the story feel more natural. Although I think it will improve with time. At the end I will say, story has huge potential so keep it up, author.
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Love this story so far, it was a lot more fun than I expected even with that unique description of the story. The only problem I faced reading is with the flow of the story. I mean with Conversation between characters. you can try to make them synchronize to make the story feel more natural. Although I think it will improve with time. At the end I will say, story has huge potential so keep it up, author.
Little Miss Lovely and the Unlucky Kazuma
Urban · Jozan