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The first Few Lines, till the *** are talking about Xie Qing's Point of View, but they make no sense, only if it was Lu Yin's PoV would these lines make sense @MisterBombastic.

That is cause it had to do with the Other Work of Author, Aimless Ascension. This oracle, Ai, the Assassin, Twilight, and the Wolf are 100% Character from his earlier Novel.

Nothing was really said about how Lia's current state is.... Just that she sounds weak und and says she is ok

This Novel is good, but it REALLY needs a --------- Line between Scenes Changes/PoV changes.

"Just what the hell did you pay you?" Should be: "Just what the hell did he pay you?"