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Where are the rest of the chapters then?

Awesome synopsis that makes one really want to read it and the twist which is the setting sounds great and also the ability sounds really cool

The story is good but damn bro just 5 chapters in and you want me to pay, other authors would wait until their 50th chapter to turn on payed reading but this guy did the 5th chapter

I mean I got to be honest this novel is great but dude some of the arcs are just way to stretched out. I remember one of the chapters was literally just splitting rooms between people. That's it. Could not have done that in 10 sentences instead of a full chapter

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pretty intersecting. Like it very much its cool and nice ding like the system part and hoe the Mc Is aa doorknob'all in all I enjoyed if and it mesh and shit at the same time