Badges 11
Moments 27
I really want somebody to accuse Sunny of being a devil and having to respond truthfully that he is no devil.
ch 1120 Performance Review
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Yeah… author should go back and rip out all of this obvious word count padding. “It stops later” isn’t making me want to keep reading now.
He looked at it again.
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar
Even the name of his first or sometimes origin rune, the yellow turban or scarf sometimes strongman, or talismans… even the colors and levels and quality of items and skills and creatures are different so you can’t even tell if something is stronger or weaker based on the translation
[ Quality: Fine quality (two strips) ]
My Runes Can Be Upgraded
Games · Angry Laugh
I expect some weird translations, but this is so inconsistent that you can’t really get into the story
[ Quality: Fine quality (two strips) ]
My Runes Can Be Upgraded
Games · Angry Laugh
I don’t get why so many authors here want to bang their own sister.
Alice flinched and grumbled to herself, 'You never told me you met another woman...'
White Online
Games · Alekzi
This was from his first nightmare right? I don’t remember that fight or how he killed it. Anyone have the chapter # so I can reread it?
ch 592 Soul Slayer
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Author can you please stop inflating word count with all this copy/paste. It really detracts from the story.
Rank 1 Advanced Alchemist Master,
Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!
Fantasy · Emmanuel_Peter203
Author you spent the entire 20+ chapters saying how little he felt for his family. This reaction is way out of line with that. If he’s this emotional now, he should have been at least a little more worried before this other than “I guess I’ll see what my family is doing even though I don’t care about them”
'Watch over your son. Your son will someday be a great man, shaking the world and make you proud in the Afterlife. No one will not know my name! And if I ever get to know, what beast did this to you, I will end its life, grind its meat and make it suffers a thousand fold of your pain!'
Lord Shadow
Fantasy · Keikokumars
No job? He had a job at the Internet cafe, and a paragraph or two later he reaffirms he had a job… Don’t be this lazy with details author! These things really detract from the story. Also use the same gender pronoun throughout (her vs his). It gets confusing and makes the reader think you are taking about some other character you forgot to introduce to the scene (which also happened in earlier chapters)
He was a 23 years old man, with no job or prospect, he is not yet married, and he has no money.
Lord Shadow
Fantasy · Keikokumars
This is what, 12 chapters since the end of the previous volume and he still hasn’t checked his new memories from the battle before and in the spire? And the status of that damaged armor — I’m guessing he will give it to marble saint to wear bc big armor doesn’t seem to suit his style of combat.
ch 362 Breakfast Invitation
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Guessing now the real fight for the gate home begins. Climbing the crimson spire arc?
ch 330 Siege of the Crimson Spire (16)
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Anyone have recommendations for novels on here with similar quality to read while we wait for more chapters of this to come out?
ch 314 Leaving the Dark City
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
No, all other survivors were traitors or killed by traitors. The author had waaaaaaaaayyyy too many traitors it would have been literally impossible for any humans to survive in the original timeline. Author needs to work on consistency, grammar, and stop making up a completely new concept every page for the MC to come out unscathed. There are no consequences to any actions other than MC gets more coins/kills/items/etc but those gains don’t mean anything in the next page because he just gets another order of magnitude higher resources the next page. Not to mention all the “contracts” all these other characters agree to be a slave which is way out of character for them and is impossible to believe.
What did that mean? It would mean to destroy a good part of New York city. That wouldn't be acceptable. The system wouldn't let it happen.
I Only Wanted A Class In The Apocalypse
Fantasy · ranmaro
I thought it was mentioned in a previous chapter that this was his soul weapon that still had some hardening effect but was not his original hardening ability because he has shadow now?
"Layla! It looks like me and you are going to have to take that balloon down!" Nate shouted, slamming his fist together and activating the hardening skill over his hands. Qi wasn't the only thing he had trained while the others had been away.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Covid alert
Slowly, the cloaked man nodded his head. At least he didn't fully ignore Foster. With a light smile, the young man looked at the figure in front of him, "You know, you can take all that off if it's uncomfortable. Don't need to keep wearing stuff like that. Breathing with a mask on your face like that must be pretty hard, eh?"
Starlight Necromancer
Fantasy · DiceVR
No. The whole joke and phrases used is “funny” because the premise that lgbt = bad. It’s lazy writing, in 99% of chinese webnovels, and just plain not funny.
Evan, who was now fully awake, blushed in shame as he cursed, "You damn fatty, you're the one with strange preferences! Do I look like I'd avoid contact with women?"
Ascenders Rift
Urban · ShadowsFinger
Chinese webnovels treat female characters as property to show status for the male characters. They have no personality or character arcs of their own. Author should try writing all characters as male first, then randomly choosing half and changing them to female names/pronouns. Writing will be a lot better.
Fatty Joe felt a lot better hearing this, he turned to Emilia and comforted, "Emmy, don't be worried, I'd never hand you over to a pig like this, it's even worse than trying to feed a toad swan meat. More like putting gold on a pile of shit!"
Ascenders Rift
Urban · ShadowsFinger
Lots of webnovels on here are obsessed with nonsensical status vendettas. In the real world no rich person/company would soend resources going “to war” with another rich person/company over single insult to a child. They would immediately lose money and contracts. Petty vindictiveness is not good for business.
Michael no longer paid him any mind, he shifted his sights onto Evan's group and made a refined smile as he spoke, "How touching... the saying holds true - birds of a feather do flock together. A fallen honor student fresh out of jail, and a fallen young lord of the prestigious Goldsmith family. You two make a fine couple, but it's a pity that you won't have long to celebrate your little reunion. Don't think about entering any prestigious restaurants in the future, for you can be sure there be unexpected encounters and circumstances."
Ascenders Rift
Urban · ShadowsFinger
Only here for daily recommended fast pass, but this is more cringey than most
The people had not yet processed his words when Jenkins had stood up and kicked Shi Lang in the chest. The impact was so strong that the people all heard a cracking sound as Shi Lang flew over a distance and fell outside the canteen doors.
Ace Of Terrans
Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH