The_Flash_4638 - Profile

3 chapters in and i can tell this has potential and its been great so far.. Also its a overlord stroy where mc isnt a part of Nazarick which is extremely rare to find in an overlord fanfiction.

He becomes thor then decides that he doesnt want to be him and changes into a normal human. Characters can randomly hear his thoughts for no reason.

Really good a little fast paced but still great .. .. . .. .. . .. .. .. .. . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. . . . . . .. . .

Its trash pain and simple characters dont act like themselves and you litterly cant undertand anything in the beginning... . . . . . .. .. . . . . . .. . .. . .. . .. . . . .. . . .. .

Its just bad ... . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. .. .. . . . . .

Gets nerfed hard basically a slave and ROB interfers in the story alot she has apocalypse powers and magic from taj mahal but almost dies to black panther are you f-ing serious