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SmartShikhar

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2020-12-25 Joined Global

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Interesting Conversation between Indra and the rest...

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I have left some para comments mentioning a few Grammatical and Typing errors. Please check.

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Fantasy · VishalGupta

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First word They should be replaced with The.

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interfere should be replaced with Intervene I think.

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to a one race.

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or Sol.

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...one of the Mythical...

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Overprotective Jack. What a great Big Brother.

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Fantasy · VishalGupta

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He is the reincarnation of Abhimanyu. That's to be expected.

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indeed.

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