Lindsay_P

2yr

Posted

I am very much enjoying this story. it is an interesting twist on the transmigration trope. I went ahead and bought all the chapters! the only thing I'm confused about is there seems to be a chapter missing between 15 and 16? the storyline completely jumped. I'm a bit confused.

I Might Have Too Many Husbands

· QingTing

Lindsay_P

2yr

Posted

the story is really good, as are the drawings. I went through 5 chapters in no time at all, and cannot wait to read more. the only complaint I have is that the dialogue is a bit clunky. Hopefully it gets better the farther we get into the story

Resurrection Reunion: The Exclusive Love

· Ake Culture

Lindsay_P

2yr

Replied to bubblebunnytea

I'm a true crime junkie. I do a lot of reading.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - The Sickly Young Princess

The Evil Emperor's Fragile Heart

Fantasy · Jaywalker_Holmes

Lindsay_P

2yr

Replied to Jaywalker_Holmes

only if you manage to open the jugular. it would take multiple passes with a knife to kill someone by slitting their throats, which would make for a slow and painful death.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - The Sickly Young Princess

The Evil Emperor's Fragile Heart

Fantasy · Jaywalker_Holmes

Lindsay_P

2yr

Posted

it seems like an interesting story, but I just can't get past all the editing errors. it makes it difficult to concentrate on the story. ....

My roommate is a devil

Fantasy · nishidurani

Lindsay_P

2yr

Commented

talk about unnecessary violence; what was the point of slitting her throat? if she's completely unable to move, it would've been easier to suffocate her with a pillow...

ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - The Sickly Young Princess

The Evil Emperor's Fragile Heart

Fantasy · Jaywalker_Holmes

Lindsay_P

2yr

Posted

this story is a solid idea, however I felt the constant shift between 2nd and 3rd person to be extremely annoying. could definitely do with some reworking.