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Posted

The title itself sets the theme. It's a story of vengeance. A princess whose family members and tribes have been massacred. Seeks Justice and Vengeance. There are some good moments of strategic race wars.

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Fantasy · VishalGupta

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3yr

Posted

loved this from the first chapter. A diverse but very familiar caste of Characters. Known yet unknown events. An OP ML with Intelligence. A demi-god living in the mortal world. The action scenes from C7 when the ML displays his Elementalist nature is great ;)

Karna The True Elementalist

Eastern · VishalGupta

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3yr

Commented

Next chapter please...

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Fantasy · VishalGupta

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3yr

Commented

Loved the explanation of Elements and Siddhaantas. Looking forward to 36 Tattvas and 8 Chakras.

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Abhimanyu The Scion of Soma & Indra

Eastern · VishalGupta

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3yr

Replied to MeLoner

True.

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Abhimanyu The Scion of Soma & Indra

Eastern · VishalGupta

Bhaarat

3yr

Replied to SmartShikhar

It's here.

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Karna The True Elementalist

Eastern · VishalGupta

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3yr

Commented

LOL Elizabeth I and Yamato? Former Queen and WW2 Battleship together.

ch 12 Pearl Harbor, Huwaii Island

Karna The True Elementalist

Eastern · VishalGupta

Bhaarat

3yr

Replied to Anish_Kumar_6194

yeah. he did a lot of reshuffling.

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Abhimanyu The Scion of Soma & Indra

Eastern · VishalGupta

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3yr

Replied to Anish_Kumar_6194

in fact two new chapters are here. The author seems to have renamed the 15th chapter to The Approaching Battle. 16th chapter is new with the title of 15th Chapter, that is, old title but new chapter with new content. loved the description of demons and the analyses of the match up. both 16 and 17 chapter are great.

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Abhimanyu The Scion of Soma & Indra

Eastern · VishalGupta

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3yr

Replied to VishalGupta

well it is not for free. you owe me a plot with a Ramayana character as the ML. :P

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Karna The True Elementalist

Eastern · VishalGupta

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3yr

Commented

As requested, I have proof read this chapter and left comments. most of them are minor punctuation issues. hoping you would write another novel based on another character preferably from Ramayan this time :)

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