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Nice storyline author, but can you please be consistent with the name, you already referred to the protagonist with three different names and I'm still in chapter 3

so please author write this like a story or manga but please not like an article.

seriously!!! six chapters talking about noting. You already have a good storyline with an awesome plots, you can easily write way over a thousand chapters without including six chapters where you just described the outflow of testosterone and men flexing their muscles. I mean what is the importance of those six chapters.

Nice storyline and good character development, but the author tends to dump too much information, sometimes it's as if the author is in a world of his forgetting about his readers. For example, the author spend much a whole chapter about what some of the side characters are thinking, and spend almost another chapter about why they are thinking that way, and then spend another chapter justifying their thinking, and before you know it we are already reading three to four chapters just about one simple subject. And you don't have to describe every process involved in most production sometimes I have to check if am not reading a science textbook. it's exhausting.

Nice storyline but you jam-packed too many information at once, it's better if one situation is settled before adding and problem. For example the main character and his harem needs training, but whenever he his training another issue will show up. it makes it the story boring if he cannot even protect himself after more than 500 chapters.

Thanks will really appreciate that. Good luck.

I'm sorry author but you were gone for a long time and I was expecting to at least find about 5 or 6 chapters. I was excited because I love your book but you only dropped one chapter and it's even an error chapter that's a bit disappointing. Thanks for ruining one of my best book.

I don't understand why you keep making the same mistake, especially when it comes to the characters name especially the main character you keep calling him Kiba on numerous occasions when we all know his name is Alexander kael Touch.

Did you make me waste my time reading statuses? that is an all time low. trying to add more chapters.

Nice storyline, but the battle scene is too much it's becoming a bit tiring and boring when everything is about them fighting and fighting and fighting. Other things are needed for their survival apart from fighting all the time. I end up jumping the fight chapters because it's just too much.

Nice chapter, will he also invent helicopters that will be nice he will just have an helipad in his palace.

Nice work author. just want to ask has begin to mine for crude oil and now has a refinery? I would also like to know the type of cars, buses and trucks been used. Also it will be nice if he can introduce recreational activities like a national sport festival. Keep up the good work.

Hello author it's very hard just reading one chapter per day, can you please make it like ten chapters. The cliffhanger really hurts.

waiting for when he will discover crude oil , can't even imagine what he will create then

Thanks author great work. I was actually thinking you will add Bauhaus architecture to the folds of architectural development.

why does it look like I'm watching a movie that jumps scenes. I don't even understand what is going on. Does the MC has a dual personality?

Now the fool can see what elemental power is meant to do.

waiting for the time he will regret choosing the least practical of the elements. He can even fight with it without having metals around him. can't be used when fighting multiple opponents.

waiting for the time he will regret choosing the least practical of the elements. He can even fight with it without having metals around him. can't be used when fighting multiple opponents.

The imbecile is putting every point in agility all he can think about is running away. How far can the fool run without stamina and endurance? please author his Stupidity becoming annoying. Also why is he keeping the yellow stone for himself? if his companion also advances that will build his strength.