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Why was it always a bloody umbrella corp in these situations? Like, even if the corporate overlords were greedy and evil, you, the scientists, and staff, should bloody know better!
I am the God of Technology
Sci-fi · Kotario
started instead of sparked
Dante thanked them and entered the car. He sparked it and then slowly moved out of the airport before joining the main highway then speeding towards his rented apartment at home. On the way, his thoughts wandered.
I am the God of Technology
Sci-fi · Kotario
better to use "internal composition" or just "inside"
Dante obliged and got in, sitting opposite Beatrice. The internal of the shuttle was like a train compartment, or like the inside of a carriage. Due to the limited space, Dante's and Beatrice's knees were touching.
I am the God of Technology
Sci-fi · Kotario
orc not ore... it's mixed throughout the book
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a quieter place not quitter place
As I preferred quitter place, I walked to the back of the crowd and especially hid from the overly kind Evan. He would turn the mood so bright that I would get uncomfortable.
Rebirth of the Ruined Noble
Fantasy · Emberlight
not "could've" should be "couldn't"
Eliana was already quite stressed regarding the theft, and more stress wasn't good for her at this time since he didn't want to see Eliana when she was angry. Even if Gabriel actually took the letter, it was a very minor thing. He could've let Gabriel leave over that.
Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
"holding onto" not "folding into"
Lelin came out of the city, still folding into the white orb. He gazed at the city of light in the distance.
Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
great naming sense....[img=faceslap]
The name of the burger shop was.... Extraordinary burgers.
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasy · Zero_writer
could have opened the mre and tossed in the chewing gum
He remembered how he used his MRE food as bait and now along with his body his heart was also aching.
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasy · Zero_writer
Hearing Evan, Valery's eyes lit up and the next second a comfortable chair and pair of 3D glasses appeared in her hand.
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasy · Zero_writer
so they killed it Wile E. Coyote style.
Half of its body was squashed under the gigantic boulder as well. There was a defensive armor-like shell that appeared on its head at the last moment, clearly its lifesaving ability. But even that wasn't able to protect the serpent. And its body lay just close to the nest. Bearing all the brunt of the boulder and protecting its children at the expense of its life.
Hero of Darkness
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
tyvm
It had almost the same description as the Farm Animal Companion Skill. I guess there might be some sort of classification for all these skills, which I'd call Summon-type Skills. They let you summon a new monster every three levels, so maybe I could use the Skill Points into these Skills and get even more summons!
Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
what? no daggers? daggers can be used as offensive or defensive weapons, then of course are the spiked shields, then there's the spears and glaive and gauntlets.
Obviously, there was a huge difference between swords, hammers, and axes… But Yagnar was giving a very, very simplified explanation of each weapon's strengths and weaknesses.
Strongest Angel's Death Wish
Fantasy · MisterFlare
hmmm a dragon from krypton, not a smart choice to hunt
Their walk back concluded as Mog speculated about what they might find today, spouting names like Kryptodrakon and Spinosaur, neither of which Mikhail was familiar with.
Strongest Angel's Death Wish
Fantasy · MisterFlare
so the starspawn are this story's drej, and of course Cael is Cale... must be a fan of Titan AE...
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My Blood Mage System
Fantasy · Garessta
a spell to cause them to be possessed by a starspawn
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My Blood Mage System
Fantasy · Garessta
how is a cat barking?