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I believe that you need to use she here instead of he because it's referring to Irene here not Ziel.
Princess Irene fell silent after she heard Ziel's words because everything he said was true. Didn't he participate in the training to become stronger because he was weak?
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Princess Fritz, lol! Prince Fritz, ok.
"Ah, that is…" Princess Fritz wanted to say that her sister was fighting the earth dragon emperor. But his father raised his hand to stop him.
Invincible Colorless Butler
Fantasy · Nzr150cc
It should be him not her.
Mu Xiaojin didn't know what to say. Yun Qingchen, who was in her arms, suddenly moved at this moment. His two chubby little hands stretched out desperately and waved in Yun Feng's direction. Mu Xiaojin smiled when she saw that. "Xiao Feng, Chenchen wants you to hold her!"
Genius Summoner
Fantasy · Like Snow 3000
It should be sister not brother in this context.
"Prince Ozkar, I know that your intentions are good. But whether my brother wants to teach at the academy or not is up to her." Zenoa looked at Prince Ozkar and said seriously.
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Young instead of Yong.
"Yong friend, let's talk nicely!" If this continued, his Li family's guards would be gone!
Genius Summoner
Fantasy · Like Snow 3000
It should be She not He starting this sentence
"He is the student with the best grades in this academy's entrance examination. Not only smart, but she is also powerful and very charming. I must admit that she is prettier than my aunt, Princess Cattleya." Princess Seira answered in a low voice so that the people around her wouldn't hear, especially Azalia. She didn't want Azalia to be angrier because Princess Seira secretly talked about her with Princess Freya.
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Niece should be used here instead of nephew
"I'm not aware of such personal matters either! If you're curious, why don't you ask Ken directly? Didn't you say that you were his acquaintance?" Princess Seira answered frantically. Although she is Kalya's nephew, their relationship is not that close until Kalya wants to discuss her personal relationship.
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He should be used here instead of she
"That is…as I said, she is the lover of my aunt, Cattleya Venetia. I thought Princess Irene knew it too when I saw that she wasn't surprised after hearing what I said." Princess Seira heavily repeated her words and looked at Princess Irene. She wanted to drag Princess Irene with her because Princess Seira didn't want to deal with Azalia alone.
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Fantasy · Nzr150cc
Pronoun He should be used here instead of She. Grammar error.
"Because she is my aunt's lover!" Princess Seira accidentally answered Azalia's question. But she quickly covered her mouth with both hands after realizing what she had said to Azalia.
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I thought Ziel was chanting for a spell but that translation is a lot better.
"Hmm…as expected, the barrier in this place is powerful. Pada awalnya saya ingin memasuki kastil secara diam-diam, tetapi itu tampaknya tidak mungkin. Pada tingkat ini, bukankah lebih baik jika saya membuat keributan besar?" Ziel muttered and suddenly raised one of his hands.
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Fantasy · Nzr150cc
Ziel shouldn't be used here, instead it should be Ken.
"I'm sorry, miss. But I saw this book first. Can you let it go?" Ziel spoke politely to the girl.
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Needs to be translated. Jumping from English to another language and then back to English is confusing.
Crack after crack formed in the ice wall. Penghalang itu tidak akan bertahan lama menerima serangan itu. But Princess Cordelia had expected it.
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I do agree with friendship but nothing more than that. She is undeserving of romance in my opinion.
ch 119 Chapter 21
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Cunning box or cunning fox? Hard to tell in this chapter.
ch 343 Revelation (6)
Genius Summoner
Fantasy · Like Snow 3000
Himself and he needs to be replaced by herself and she since it's referring to Irene.
Little by little, Princess Irene finally managed to lift the ball. But she couldn't move it from that spot and instead dropped it again. Princess Irene took a deep breath and let it out slowly. She tried to stabilize himself as he felt the blood in his body churning from the suppression of the vest.
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