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I seriously hope you accally do other universes as well. but do war hammer last of you use it. Adam needs a lit more then what he has to deal with that. like somehow get a lot more powers like shadow monarch powers, naruto, danmachi, overlord, the reincarnated slime, skyrim, doom slayer,etc . there is no end to what you can add to the story. just got to be creative with it.

I'm crying that you are quiting the story. non the less the story was really good

that accaly sounds interesting

dose it only have to be war hammer

try listening to some what if naruto on you tube they might inspire you

I love this story though plz don't drop

so why not go kill bandits at night wile everyone sleeps, or let him have access to dark soul universe the soils can go both ways in the way of sp points or doom slayer

as long as you don't drop it it's all good my dude. plus did you look up a little on space marines

sorry dude keep soldiering through

ok still don't hurt to try looking them up

is astartis( I don't know how to spell it) to strong in this universe they are basically super solders with good armor and weapons

hahahaha

thx for the chapter, these are getting shorter it seems or am I just enjoying the read to much

thx for chap and I'll be waiting for tomorrow

can't wait for next chapter

that's fare

This story is great so far. Don't forget about warhammer univers, halo, dbz/ super, bleach, the old republic Era, gundam, fairy tail, elder scrolls, dark souls universe, gods, etc. There are many you can pick from plz put freeza in this he knows how to take planets, and plz don't forget the summons that can improve there power like the shinobi can become stronger